Comment from Janetsue

Excellent

This is so beautiful, Roy. Elaine must be thrilled that you to have written it for her. A lot of things can enter into our writings and your love is glowing throughout this special gift for her. :-) Janet

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Janet, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is a lovely birthday poem. I'm sure what she wants most of all from you is your love and faithfulness. Those thing as much more important that diamond rings and gold encrusted things.

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Beth, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

If I had a six, it would be yours to share with Elaine. To deliver such a beautiful poem, declaring how much she means to you and how you will always be there at her side is so heartwarming. You both are blessed.

Smiles and hugs, Carol

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Beth, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

reply by Begin Again on 31-Oct-2021

I know life is confusing, but did I get a new name? LOL Or are you just messing with my mind... which is quite easy to do of late.
Just teasing you...Hugs, Carol

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021

God knows

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

A very nice birthday poem, written in a different form.

When you decided to disperse
A birth day wish in rhyming verse,
I'm sure Elaine will be quite stirred
As she recites your every word.

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Paul, for these marvellous comments and a great review, and a poem. you?re a talent, blessings Roy

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A sweet and endearing tribute to Elaine on her birthday and I hope you have a wonderful celebration together Roy, she will be pleased with this fine poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Dolly, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Chrissy710

Exceptional

Oh Roy how very lovely and i am sure Elaine is thrilled and will have a better birthday now for having such a good man by her side Well written I loved the quatern line

Happy Birthday Elaine Many happy Returns Cheers Chris xx

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Chris, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A lovely poem for Elaine's birthday, and she is indeed blessed to have a man write her a poem of such love and commitment. Please pass on my birthday wishes - and I hope you are treating her to something special!
Very nicely written.
Wendy

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Dawn, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Carlos' girl

Excellent

What a sweet, loving poem. I like what you wrote for Elaine's Birthday... The words have a sense of such sincerity. The theme works well with this format. Nice work poet

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

reply by Carlos' girl on 31-Oct-2021

You're so welcome

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Such a beautiful love poem for your amazing wife, Elaine! I liked how you modified the refrain at the end and you have showed that the greatest treasure is the light of true love which is your faithful gift to her. Happy Birthday to Elaine!! ð??·ð??ºð??¼ð??µð???

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Helen, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Edward Escobar

Excellent

I enjoyed your every words formed with absolute love. How it enriches the heart of one that has written a powerful verse so unique, that has illustrated a component of one's undying desire expressed so deep and yet commanding. I thank you for sharing this one dynamic poem.

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy