One-Liner
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Comment from Mary Shifman
These one liner poems can often be very cryptic, but I think I get this one. If something doesn't make any sense, then stewing over it isn't going to necessarily clarify it so throwing up you hands and saying, "It doesn't matter, anyway," may be the only solution. Oh well, I took a shot in the dark, anyway.
I'm not sure how one line can be considered a poem. It seems more like a proverb, adage or motto, but whatever. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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These one liner poems can often be very cryptic, but I think I get this one. If something doesn't make any sense, then stewing over it isn't going to necessarily clarify it so throwing up you hands and saying, "It doesn't matter, anyway," may be the only solution. Oh well, I took a shot in the dark, anyway.
I'm not sure how one line can be considered a poem. It seems more like a proverb, adage or motto, but whatever. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thank you much for the review...John
Comment from Susan Newell
I'm not a fan of one-liners, because they are so often adages without poetic notes. But you have managed to create poetry with the excellent use of matters/matter. Great job.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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I'm not a fan of one-liners, because they are so often adages without poetic notes. But you have managed to create poetry with the excellent use of matters/matter. Great job.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thank you much for the review...John
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You are welcome.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This One Line Poem contest entry speaks about the state, status, stand and meaning of matter and what makes matter a matter; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this, happy reviewing this; God Bless you, my good writer, post more, dear. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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This One Line Poem contest entry speaks about the state, status, stand and meaning of matter and what makes matter a matter; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this, happy reviewing this; God Bless you, my good writer, post more, dear. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Many thanks...John (Good morning)
Comment from Jasminium
Amazing. Fantastic. Great. Love it. Not sure if it was intentional but love the sarcasm..
The visual is well complemented..Good luck and keep writing !!
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Amazing. Fantastic. Great. Love it. Not sure if it was intentional but love the sarcasm..
The visual is well complemented..Good luck and keep writing !!
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Sandra Barlow
Well, this is certainly true. I am yet to understand how one line can be considered a poem, but then I am still learning. For one line, you have done well.
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Well, this is certainly true. I am yet to understand how one line can be considered a poem, but then I am still learning. For one line, you have done well.
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you