Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your ballad. My favorite time of day is sitting outside in my rocking chair and watching the sunrise as the birds also wake up. 'it's beautiful and is also a reminder God's in charge.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021

Thanks Barbara, for these excellent comments review, blessings Roy

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Excellent praise to the creator. Let everything that has breath praise the Lord. Yes, the wee hours when all is still, the meeting of the new day. Perfect moment. Good one. Bro.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Ben, for these generous comments and great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

This is a beautiful and uplifting poem. The rhyme and rhythm is perfect and as I sit here with my morning coffee, it 'feels' like sunrise to me and it's a cloudy, over-cast day here. Your imagery is that engaging. Really nice work.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Mary, for these generous comments and great review, blessings Roy

reply by Mary Shifman on 16-Oct-2021

You are welcome.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This is a beautiful and uplifting verse that you have crafted, Roy. I enjoyed the layers of loveliness that you described as the morning advances and spreads its blanket. Nice analogy.

Melissa

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Melissa,for these generous comments and great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

In God and His tender mercies I revel. A new day in Christ dawns every day. Sending you my best today as always for this inspiring and uplifting poem. Love the art, too.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021

Thanks Sally, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from Cecilia Lynne1

Exceptional

Another inspiring poem. Expressing your thoughts and reflections of another day.
I love the chosen google art, supporting your poem " Dawning Sun"!
Yes! Our God's blessings are new every day, beginning at the dawning of the day.
Your descriptive ability to poetically rhyme and paint an imaginary picture vividly brings your writing alive. The only comment that I have to add would be that I may have chosen a different bolder or larger font to bring out the presentation, lettering. I do like the white on the beautiful royal blue. Thank you for sharing your blessings with me and others. Continue writing, stay safe during this unpredictable time, and all the best to you and all those you love.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021

Thanks so much CeciliaLynne, for these generous comments and great review, blessings Roy

Comment from scongrove

Exceptional

Beautiful artwork to go along with beautiful words. I really enjoyed this one, Roy. It is a fresh breath of sunshine to read this morning. Yesterday was not a good day for me, so this is just what the doctor ordered. It is definitely inspiring and lifted my spirits.
Thank you for sharing this here.
My favorite part. It reminds me of sitting outside early in the morning and listening to the trees as the cool breeze moves through them.
I hear the hallowed laughter
as winds embrace the trees.
They raise their boughs to Heaven,
leaves flutter in the breeze.

Always your fan,
Shana :)

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021

Thanks so much dear girl for your amazing input and compliment, you encourage me

Comment from Begin Again

Exceptional

I love this one! It reminds me that with each new morning, we are blessed to start fresh and appreciate the good the Lord has given us even though we might not be able to see them in front of us. Sometimes, we just need to open our eyes and heart.

Hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Carol, for these generous comments and great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This spiritual Biblical influenced poem speaks to remind us the love of our Lord, His love never ceases as His mercies never come to an end, every new morning shows us; well said, well done; thank you for this, happy to review this; God Bless you, my dear good writer, wish read more. ALCREATOR, October, Festive Month...

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for these generous comments and great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

What a beautiful poem. Terrific visuals here. I can almost see that dawning sun.

Excellent imagery, presentation and the choice of artwork, as well as a well sustained rhyme scheme.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for these generous comments and great review, blessings Roy