My Twenty-Second Birthday
A lieutenant spends his 22nd birthday surrounded in Vietnam21 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Devastating story--tense and taut narration has the ring of experience. This may be a winner.
Before I could even yell to hit the dirt [. They=>they] mowed our point man and three behind him down.
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Devastating story--tense and taut narration has the ring of experience. This may be a winner.
Before I could even yell to hit the dirt [. They=>they] mowed our point man and three behind him down.
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you! So good to hear from you😊
I just started working on editing my book. So I don't think I will be doing any more stories for awhile, let alone read any such as yours 😟
There are several good people and excellent writer's on fan story. You are one!!!!!!!
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Thanks for that! Stop by whenever you need a quick break--most of my stories are short.
