Contest Entry and Winners
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "It's A Serious Case of Whodunit "Short Stories
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Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
hahahahaha! Well, at least the guy's original and a bit creative. He doesn't fall back on the same old, same old, right? I'm so glad you decided to play along with us in this contest!! I'm still trying to work on my entry - it's certainly not as easy as it seems. Or, at least, it sure hasn't been for me. But then, I am sooooo out of practice! Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Carol,
hahahahaha! Well, at least the guy's original and a bit creative. He doesn't fall back on the same old, same old, right? I'm so glad you decided to play along with us in this contest!! I'm still trying to work on my entry - it's certainly not as easy as it seems. Or, at least, it sure hasn't been for me. But then, I am sooooo out of practice! Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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it was fun and came out pretty easy for me, just based it on something my son would have done back in the high school days. Thanks for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
This is a cute story. I think it is the kind of story that children will love. Unfornately most teachers are wise to that 'dog ate my homework' story and aren't like to believe it.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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This is a cute story. I think it is the kind of story that children will love. Unfornately most teachers are wise to that 'dog ate my homework' story and aren't like to believe it.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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I know but the picture was so cute I had to use it. The ending was a bit different and I was looking for a picture. When I saw the pup, I had to revise. LOL
Hugs, Carol
Comment from kahpot
"Fortunes" can make or break such anticipated moments, I feel a bit sorry for Max as he already looks like he is going to get the blame, an excellent read and very well written-love the photo, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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"Fortunes" can make or break such anticipated moments, I feel a bit sorry for Max as he already looks like he is going to get the blame, an excellent read and very well written-love the photo, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you ... the story ending was different but when I found the picture of Max, I had to change it. He was too cute. Thanks for the review.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Sherry Asbury
This just delights me. It is quite a concept for a contest. You stuck right to the form and I got the giggles about halfway through. Poor old Max - well every family needs a scapegoat!
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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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This just delights me. It is quite a concept for a contest. You stuck right to the form and I got the giggles about halfway through. Poor old Max - well every family needs a scapegoat!
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Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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When I saw the picture of the pup with the sign, I couldn't resist. He needed a good defense lawyer. LOL Reminding me a lot of my son back in those good old days of high school.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
What a classic creation Carol, the thought that this dear boy resembled me in my junior years as a human, I think I had to creatively make excuses to avoid too much punishment for my educational slackness, beautifully designed, creatively written, and thoughtfully posted, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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What a classic creation Carol, the thought that this dear boy resembled me in my junior years as a human, I think I had to creatively make excuses to avoid too much punishment for my educational slackness, beautifully designed, creatively written, and thoughtfully posted, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Roy... it was a fun little story, but I had to stand up in defense of Max... LOL Poor pup getting accused of everything. Sounded just like my son too way back when.
Hugs, Carol
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Me too Carol,