Sun Catcher
A Lyric Essay.36 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Biographical Non-Fiction speaks how wishfully you make wishes and dreams for your personal physical gain, as you know the glow of the lazy sun filters thru' your smile; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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This Biographical Non-Fiction speaks how wishfully you make wishes and dreams for your personal physical gain, as you know the glow of the lazy sun filters thru' your smile; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading my work.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am so sorry for your loss and your words here are heartfelt and tragic. And your last few lines tell me that you still see a glimmer of hope in life after your suffering. A well written post about the sadness that has engulfed your life just now, I hope some healing comes your way to relieve your grief my friend, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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I am so sorry for your loss and your words here are heartfelt and tragic. And your last few lines tell me that you still see a glimmer of hope in life after your suffering. A well written post about the sadness that has engulfed your life just now, I hope some healing comes your way to relieve your grief my friend, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Thaank you, Dolly.
Comment from Wendy G
This is a very moving and lyrical piece as you describe the various griefs which drag you down - but your spirit of optimism and hope do triumph. While you can anticipate heaven with joy, knowing you will see loved ones again, and also be blessed with a fully healed body, you will be a sun catcher on earth, bringing golden light and warmth in again. Well done!
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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This is a very moving and lyrical piece as you describe the various griefs which drag you down - but your spirit of optimism and hope do triumph. While you can anticipate heaven with joy, knowing you will see loved ones again, and also be blessed with a fully healed body, you will be a sun catcher on earth, bringing golden light and warmth in again. Well done!
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for your delightful review.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
SSSSSStupendous! A lyrical tour de force--is this what they call prose/poetry? Stunning imagery. Breathtaking. Cheerssssss. LIZ
Sugg: [OMIT fully] unfurled (unfurled suffices)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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SSSSSStupendous! A lyrical tour de force--is this what they call prose/poetry? Stunning imagery. Breathtaking. Cheerssssss. LIZ
Sugg: [OMIT fully] unfurled (unfurled suffices)
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading my work; you understood so well the depth of my quest, thank you so much.
Comment from karenina
What a beautifully expressed picture of your soul here! Perhaps one of the best pieces you have gifted us with here on Fanstory. Forged from loss and despair, yet fortified with the belief that you will rise up...
Defy grief, embrace the warmth of day and faith! I am deeply sorry for your losses my friend. I will pray that "...the glow is the lazy sun filters through (your) smile!"
Karenina
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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What a beautifully expressed picture of your soul here! Perhaps one of the best pieces you have gifted us with here on Fanstory. Forged from loss and despair, yet fortified with the belief that you will rise up...
Defy grief, embrace the warmth of day and faith! I am deeply sorry for your losses my friend. I will pray that "...the glow is the lazy sun filters through (your) smile!"
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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Thank you sooo much, Karenina.
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God Bless you!
Comment from reconciled
And Jesus said we would none enter His Kingdom unless like you in heart.
Hello Happy Feet...smile
It is the whole worlds benefit that you were born. Keep catching the Son, show us all how it's done as perfectly as perfect is allowed to be.
Love Michael
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And Jesus said we would none enter His Kingdom unless like you in heart.
Hello Happy Feet...smile
It is the whole worlds benefit that you were born. Keep catching the Son, show us all how it's done as perfectly as perfect is allowed to be.
Love Michael
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
Comment from pookietoo
A lot of deep emotion and thoughts in this story. I love how you used several paragraphs. That us very pleasant to the reader. Good luck to you in whatever you write!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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A lot of deep emotion and thoughts in this story. I love how you used several paragraphs. That us very pleasant to the reader. Good luck to you in whatever you write!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading my work.
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Welcome.
Comment from country ranch writer
zfor all of ys we take geeg an zre thank ful to one and all fir all our well being and all we have received past and present this is a n outstanding jo. you done here.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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zfor all of ys we take geeg an zre thank ful to one and all fir all our well being and all we have received past and present this is a n outstanding jo. you done here.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading my work.
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your personal essay is excellent in all respects--skillfully written, vividly descriptive--with a vast array of colorful figures of speech--and very expressive, describing grief, moving slowly toward recovery, and showing a reverence for nature and God.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Your personal essay is excellent in all respects--skillfully written, vividly descriptive--with a vast array of colorful figures of speech--and very expressive, describing grief, moving slowly toward recovery, and showing a reverence for nature and God.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thank you for your gracious comments, dear reviewer Janicee.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Wow, Amada! This is long and detailed but I read it anyway and it is rich with descriptive flair and panache! Thank you for all those rich descriptions, such as, 'the lazy sun filters through my smile,' for one, of plenty more!
I am thoughtfully thinking of what I already said, but nothing more comes to me.
Have a gorgeous day, tomorrow,
Jesse
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Wow, Amada! This is long and detailed but I read it anyway and it is rich with descriptive flair and panache! Thank you for all those rich descriptions, such as, 'the lazy sun filters through my smile,' for one, of plenty more!
I am thoughtfully thinking of what I already said, but nothing more comes to me.
Have a gorgeous day, tomorrow,
Jesse
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Jesse.
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Good morning, Amada.
I can't believe how brief your reply is versus the poem I read a day ago! You take such time describing is minute detail how every little feeling was and then you just write, thank you in the reply to the review.
I guess that is your way of doing things.
Have a good day,
Jesse