Secrets in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Secrets in the Wind - Chap 53"A story of loss, deceit, murder and crime
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Comment from AliMom
This is very exciting. I can't wait to see what happens next. I love how you blend characters into the context of the existing characters. The dialogue is particularly good and your ability to code-switch from English to Spanish adds authenticity to the conversation. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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This is very exciting. I can't wait to see what happens next. I love how you blend characters into the context of the existing characters. The dialogue is particularly good and your ability to code-switch from English to Spanish adds authenticity to the conversation. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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thank you so much for your kind review. The story is starting to wind down but it's nice to know that even new readers find enjoyment in what I write. Thank you!
Smiles, Carol