Secrets in the Wind
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Comment from Cass Carlton
quotation marks needed at beginning of
Hank's speech
Liz,were you cooking
something?Correct spelling of were. Not we're which is an abbreviationof We are.
Also there needs to be a question mark after "something"
This is an interesting story well told and well written with believable characters that speak in easily understandable prose. The story line is complicated, but quite comprehensible with the synopsis and the character list. Well done cheers Cass
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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quotation marks needed at beginning of
Hank's speech
Liz,were you cooking
something?Correct spelling of were. Not we're which is an abbreviationof We are.
Also there needs to be a question mark after "something"
This is an interesting story well told and well written with believable characters that speak in easily understandable prose. The story line is complicated, but quite comprehensible with the synopsis and the character list. Well done cheers Cass
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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It appears I am falling further and further behind, please forgive me. I appreciate the kindness of your review and am thrilled that you continue to enjoy it. Sending my thanks and a smile, Carol