Secrets in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Secrets in the Wind - Chapter 23"A story of loss, deceit, murder and crime
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Comment from Ric Myworld
There's gold in that there stream, gol-darn-it. Time to get a pan and dump out the pie, nothing sweeter than gold flakes to pad my wallet. Thanks for sharing. Have a wonderful weekend! :-)
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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There's gold in that there stream, gol-darn-it. Time to get a pan and dump out the pie, nothing sweeter than gold flakes to pad my wallet. Thanks for sharing. Have a wonderful weekend! :-)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Yeah, forget the pie and give us the gold.... sure could use some right about now. LOL
Glad that weekend is behind us and we can start anew. Hope you are doing okay. Though you probably wouldn't tell me anyways. See me sticking my tongue out at you? Smiles, Carol
Comment from Beejay
I always like the fact that you add the notes at the end of
Your chapters...I find that really helpful.
As usual your story pulled me back in as it's so compelling..it keeps me engaged...and curious to the end.
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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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I always like the fact that you add the notes at the end of
Your chapters...I find that really helpful.
As usual your story pulled me back in as it's so compelling..it keeps me engaged...and curious to the end.
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Thanks Beejay...
so happy you enjoyed the story and that I made it easier for you to follow. We read so many stories on here, it's nice to have a refresher.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sherry Asbury
This is a gripping story and you know how to end the chapter and leave the reading panting for more! Believable characters, great dialogue. You could publish this complete book very easily. I will be back for more.
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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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This is a gripping story and you know how to end the chapter and leave the reading panting for more! Believable characters, great dialogue. You could publish this complete book very easily. I will be back for more.
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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Thank you for reading and enjoying the story. I truly appreciate your thoughts. have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ritasher
I don't have much to say as I didn't see anything to pick on, hahah. I am really glad you write a backstory and introduce to characters in your author notes - for some reason, it's not a common practice here, but it's so much easier to follow what's going on in a story when it's done. I love your natural-sounding dialogues and your humor, I love your not overcrowded, but picturesque descriptions. You narrate a story well - it pulls you in from the beginning and keeps your interest to not stop reading. You're an exceptional writer in all possible ways, so there's nothing less than a six that I have to offer. Really well done!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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I don't have much to say as I didn't see anything to pick on, hahah. I am really glad you write a backstory and introduce to characters in your author notes - for some reason, it's not a common practice here, but it's so much easier to follow what's going on in a story when it's done. I love your natural-sounding dialogues and your humor, I love your not overcrowded, but picturesque descriptions. You narrate a story well - it pulls you in from the beginning and keeps your interest to not stop reading. You're an exceptional writer in all possible ways, so there's nothing less than a six that I have to offer. Really well done!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2021
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thank you so much for reading a chapter in my story and I am thrilled that you enjoyed it. I like to draw the reader into my characters and keep them connected. We read so many stories on this site that I hope a little summary helps at times. have a great day!
Smiles, Carol