My Own Little Corner
(Just me, my typewriter and I)27 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
Hello Poet,
Your Muse was working overtime in this marvelous poem
with wonderful description and rhymes.
The meter/rhythm is smooth and reads very well.
Your fingers were nimble, your muse was quick
of the ones I've read, this is my pick.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
Hello Poet,
Your Muse was working overtime in this marvelous poem
with wonderful description and rhymes.
The meter/rhythm is smooth and reads very well.
Your fingers were nimble, your muse was quick
of the ones I've read, this is my pick.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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Thank you so very much, Robert, for the wonderful review! I greatly appreciate your comments and am so happy that you enjoyed My Own Little Corner. Thank you again and enjoy the rest of your weekend!
Comment from RodG
I love the photo! I can almost envision you, Poet, sitting in that "little corner" banging away on your old-fashioned typewriter, reading your words aloud and thoroughly enjoying what you have composed. The SOUNDS Of your rhymes and the CADENCE of your lines were a delight to read. Rod
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
I love the photo! I can almost envision you, Poet, sitting in that "little corner" banging away on your old-fashioned typewriter, reading your words aloud and thoroughly enjoying what you have composed. The SOUNDS Of your rhymes and the CADENCE of your lines were a delight to read. Rod
Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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Hi, Rod! Thank you so very much for the lovely review... Certainly a fun one to write! I have a photo of myself somewhere in a box that looks exactly like the little girl in the photo. And my dad (who was an office machine repairman) took an old Royal typewriter and painted it pink for my 12th birthday! The photo brought back so many amazing memories, I just had to use it! Thanks again for the wonderful review and enjoy your day!
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It was my pleasure.
Comment from zanya
Exactly - the whole idea of our Muse and indeed our subsequent musings well portrayed here - the creative arc, as it were, that takes us and hopefully our reader to literary pastures new
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
Exactly - the whole idea of our Muse and indeed our subsequent musings well portrayed here - the creative arc, as it were, that takes us and hopefully our reader to literary pastures new
Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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Thanks so much, Zanya, for the wonderful review! I'm so glad you enjoyed and that is something that you felt transcends through all those of love to write! Thank you again and have a wonderful day!
Comment from Rebel Jim
This is an excellent depiction of the ultimate situation
that "Known Writers" and us amateurs aspire for...
Having that place or time that you can let your imagination go WILD!
I didn't see any kind of faults with your presentation... My compliments!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
This is an excellent depiction of the ultimate situation
that "Known Writers" and us amateurs aspire for...
Having that place or time that you can let your imagination go WILD!
I didn't see any kind of faults with your presentation... My compliments!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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Thank you so very much for the wonderful review and am so happy that you enjoyed! It was quite fun to write. Thank you again for your lovely comments and enjoy your day!
Comment from Senyai
Mystery Writer,
This poem is very expressive and cute to boot! A great entry as it skillfully expresses what the creative process IS. Amazing how you described this great feeling and that euphoria intensifies as the right sentence or word comes into view. So true!
Great entry that looks like a winner!
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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
Mystery Writer,
This poem is very expressive and cute to boot! A great entry as it skillfully expresses what the creative process IS. Amazing how you described this great feeling and that euphoria intensifies as the right sentence or word comes into view. So true!
Great entry that looks like a winner!
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Comment Written 06-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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Thank you, Senyai, for the great review! I am so happy that you enjoyed my thoughts on writing! Thanks again and have a beautiful day!
Comment from Lana Marie
You definitely have a gift
doing what you do!
My muse is my favorite corner, a quiet little place where I can go with my trusty, old-fashioned typewriter to peacefully sit, think and dream of fabulous new ways to turn words into wonderful thoughts!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
You definitely have a gift
doing what you do!
My muse is my favorite corner, a quiet little place where I can go with my trusty, old-fashioned typewriter to peacefully sit, think and dream of fabulous new ways to turn words into wonderful thoughts!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Lana! Thank you so much for the lovely review! It really was so much fun to write and I am so happy that you enjoyed my crafted words! Thank you again and have a beautiful evening!
Comment from Jill McCauslin
Well, isn't that the cutest photo?! You could almost write anything and get away with it, using that photo! Fortunately, your poem is also good. I like the poem a lot. I can just imagine typing away on that typewriter. Great job!
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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
Well, isn't that the cutest photo?! You could almost write anything and get away with it, using that photo! Fortunately, your poem is also good. I like the poem a lot. I can just imagine typing away on that typewriter. Great job!
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Hi, Jill! Thank you so much for the lovely review! When I saw that photo, I couldn't believe how much it looked like me when I was about that age! I have a picture of me somewhere in my old photos, but just couldn't find it! The fact that this little girl was typing on an old typewriter just like one my dad had repaired and painted pink for me when I was about 12, made it all the more fun! Thank you again for the wonderful review... I am so happy you enjoyed!