Secrets in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Secrets in the Wind - Chap 4"A story of loss, deceit, murder and crime
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Comment from Brenda Henderson
Both compelling and engaging narrative with excellent character and plot development. You also did a wonderful job painting a picture of the scenes in the minds eye of the reader. Expertly crafted. The story has excellent flow and good pace. Well done!
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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Both compelling and engaging narrative with excellent character and plot development. You also did a wonderful job painting a picture of the scenes in the minds eye of the reader. Expertly crafted. The story has excellent flow and good pace. Well done!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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I am thrilled that you liked the story that much...When I start a new one, I always fear that the reader might not get it or enjoy it as much as the writer intends it to be. Your comments made my day!
Always a smile and a hug away, Carol
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Thank You Carol!
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Smiles and hugs!
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Thank You!