Betrayal
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Comment from l.raven
OK you...this is without a doubt the best of the best of all the chapters...and you know I loved them all Sandra...
well done my amazing friend...
you out did yourself...I think Grant was taking old memories out on Tania...but face it...if he hadn't said what he do...they would still be playing footsies...and let's really think about this...it's the apology after the fight...that is worth the argument...hmmmmm...
my husband and I spent at least 75% of our marriage fighting...the other 25% trying to find things to fight about...
as for Lorna being the loud mouth...Not...she's a shareholder in Grants company...he should know her better than that...and consider the source who's mouth it came out of...he might consider another private talk with Rapier...
but the question still unanswered...who is the informer???
but at least Grant knows now there is one...so now I'll take it Tania will be staying...permanently...
can't wait for the next chapter sweet girl...
sending you much love all the way from here...
to all the way over there...
Hallelujah...Hallelujah
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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OK you...this is without a doubt the best of the best of all the chapters...and you know I loved them all Sandra...
well done my amazing friend...
you out did yourself...I think Grant was taking old memories out on Tania...but face it...if he hadn't said what he do...they would still be playing footsies...and let's really think about this...it's the apology after the fight...that is worth the argument...hmmmmm...
my husband and I spent at least 75% of our marriage fighting...the other 25% trying to find things to fight about...
as for Lorna being the loud mouth...Not...she's a shareholder in Grants company...he should know her better than that...and consider the source who's mouth it came out of...he might consider another private talk with Rapier...
but the question still unanswered...who is the informer???
but at least Grant knows now there is one...so now I'll take it Tania will be staying...permanently...
can't wait for the next chapter sweet girl...
sending you much love all the way from here...
to all the way over there...
Hallelujah...Hallelujah
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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LOL! You fought 75% of the time and looked for something to argue about the rest of the time!!!! I love that! I'm not telling Graham! Lol. (It's his blood pressure I worry about! Lol)
Thank you so much dear Linda, for another of your lovely reviews. I always look forward to them because you make me laugh my socks off! The informer will be discovered very soon, and no, you can't force me to tell you who it is ... no, those squidgy looks you're giving me, won't make me give in!! I'll let you into a secret, I've been around the office and asked everyone if they did the deed, and they all said no! So, I have to wait for Grant and Tania to find the guilty person. Oh, dear, what a t'do!
I'll send you an email tomorrow, dear friend, it's time we had another chat. Thank you again, sweet friend, for this lovely review and all the stars. Sending you loads of love and hugs. :)) Sandra xxxx
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which deed???...the one Grant and Tania did...
or the one who the informer is???...
I truly believe you don't tell anyone what they are getting for Christmas...what at'do!
spend less time walking around the office...
and trying to find out what deeds everyone has done...and find the informer...later you...and your so welcome...love your replies you...much love...xxoo
Comment from judiverse
Another exciting chapter. I can understand that Tania was upset by Grant saying that women weren't to be trusted. He misspoke by making it sound like that applied to all women. Tania was so offended she threatened to leave the island, but she's warned that it would be dangerous for her to leave. It looks as if Tania and Grant have made up their differences and romance is flowering. Grant can be somewhat overwhelming, but Tania's also a strong force. I have just recently gotten in on the novel, so I don't know the background of Lorna and whether it's true she can't be trusted. judi
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Another exciting chapter. I can understand that Tania was upset by Grant saying that women weren't to be trusted. He misspoke by making it sound like that applied to all women. Tania was so offended she threatened to leave the island, but she's warned that it would be dangerous for her to leave. It looks as if Tania and Grant have made up their differences and romance is flowering. Grant can be somewhat overwhelming, but Tania's also a strong force. I have just recently gotten in on the novel, so I don't know the background of Lorna and whether it's true she can't be trusted. judi
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Aw, thank you, Judi, for this lovely review and the sixth gold star! Lorna has been with the company for many years, working with Grant's grandfather long before Grant was old enough to take over. She is loyal and more like family than his own family. That he would even consider believing Rapier, is stupid, as Tania angrilly told him. But someone is a traitor, now to find out who. Thank you again, dear friend. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
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You're very welcome, and I certainly enjoyed. judi
Comment from aryr
WOW!!! And that is just the start to my comments, Sandra. Your words definitely captured my attention and then some. It was so typical of Monica getting the story slightly twisted. But even better, Tania went in search of Grant and brutally gave him a 'what for' talk. I loved how Grant retaliated and to think it was all because Rapier had lied once again. This was a great continuation chapter, very well done, very suspenseful and enjoyed. Blessings, hugs and smiles, Alie.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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WOW!!! And that is just the start to my comments, Sandra. Your words definitely captured my attention and then some. It was so typical of Monica getting the story slightly twisted. But even better, Tania went in search of Grant and brutally gave him a 'what for' talk. I loved how Grant retaliated and to think it was all because Rapier had lied once again. This was a great continuation chapter, very well done, very suspenseful and enjoyed. Blessings, hugs and smiles, Alie.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Aw, thank you, Alie, what a lovely review!! I'm glad you enjoyed it, lol, it was a bit fiesty, wasn't it? Now they still have to find out who the traitor was, because it definitely wasn't Lorna, I've had a word with her!! Lol. Have a lovely week, my friend. Lots of hugs and love Sandra xx
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You are so welcome Sandra. Well I know it is not Lorna as Tania proved. Oh great you have had a word with her, lol. Mmmm perhaps a bug, a tracker. Heavens I haven't a clue, that's why I enjoy it. Take care, you as well have a great week. Blessing, hugs and smiles.
Comment from damommy
Goodness! Got a little steamy there at the end. You'd think by now Grant would know better than to believe anything said by his mother or stepbrother. He's certainly easily swayed. I'm surprised by that.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Goodness! Got a little steamy there at the end. You'd think by now Grant would know better than to believe anything said by his mother or stepbrother. He's certainly easily swayed. I'm surprised by that.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Yes, he is, he still has a lot of baggage to deal with, and I think Tania is the best one to sort it. She has some, too, but hers is recent, his goes back a while and his mother is still in existance. I wondered what it would be like to discover your mother is still alive and dumped you to marry a man who didn't want her son. The pain must run deep and distrust, too. But, he isn't a total washout, he does have a lot of nice feelings, and Tania has ended up being the one who will pull him out of this. Read on, dear sister!! Thank you for this lovely review and for letting me know your thoughts. I took a hard look at this part before posting it and asked Graham his opinon. Warm hugs, dear SATP! xxx Sandra xxx
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It was a great chapter! It took a surprising turn there for a moment.
Comment from estory
This is a real emotionally charged chapter, from the tense conversation between Grant and Tania, to their explosive lovemaking scene at the end. The dialogue is packed with their biting remarks, and in the supercharged atmosphere their passion just erupts. The chapter swings from extremes and the visuals were great, I could deffinitely see this happening on the TV screen. Very visual estory
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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This is a real emotionally charged chapter, from the tense conversation between Grant and Tania, to their explosive lovemaking scene at the end. The dialogue is packed with their biting remarks, and in the supercharged atmosphere their passion just erupts. The chapter swings from extremes and the visuals were great, I could deffinitely see this happening on the TV screen. Very visual estory
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much, Estory, for this lovely review. I'm very pleased you enjoyed it. :)) Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Well done, Sandra. Wow, She certainly woke him up with a few
well spoken words. He must have realized his attitude is what got them into this predicament to begin with. If Lorna told she was coerced into telling. Threatened or tortured. Well it brought out their true feelings for each other. Well done, Dear. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Well done, Sandra. Wow, She certainly woke him up with a few
well spoken words. He must have realized his attitude is what got them into this predicament to begin with. If Lorna told she was coerced into telling. Threatened or tortured. Well it brought out their true feelings for each other. Well done, Dear. Nancy:)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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You are absolutely right, Nancy, but men take a long time realising what they've done. Tania put him wise. Lol. Oh, Nancy, thank you so much for this lovely review and the golden star. I'm so very happy that you enjoyed this part. Thank you, dear friend. Sending love and hugs, Sandra xxx
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You are welcome, Dear. Nancy:)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
In absolutely no way did I expect that to happen. Nope, you got me good with this post. I figured it would eventually happen but not now, not this way. Hmm. I need to think about it for a minute.
On Tania's nod, she continued. 'He told Grant she is his informant, (comma is needed after continued)
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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In absolutely no way did I expect that to happen. Nope, you got me good with this post. I figured it would eventually happen but not now, not this way. Hmm. I need to think about it for a minute.
On Tania's nod, she continued. 'He told Grant she is his informant, (comma is needed after continued)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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It was a shock, wasn't it? But they actually do love each other. Now to find out the real truth about the traitor. Thank you so much for the sixth gold star and for picking up that missing comma. I'll sort that right away. Warm hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from L. Kalere
Finally, Grant and Tania did the deed, and with great flair! Whew!
Great job in not letting us down over the course of the story.
I especially liked the line " ...pathetic male species," very funny.
Overall your story is written and presented like a professional, and worthy of all the praise and accolades.
Wonderful, Sandra
Best wishes,
Linda
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Finally, Grant and Tania did the deed, and with great flair! Whew!
Great job in not letting us down over the course of the story.
I especially liked the line " ...pathetic male species," very funny.
Overall your story is written and presented like a professional, and worthy of all the praise and accolades.
Wonderful, Sandra
Best wishes,
Linda
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Oh, Linda, what a lovely review, thank you so much. I've been overwhelmed with the lovely reviews I'd had, and this one is the icing on my cake. The sixth star is wonderful and I really appreciate it. Thank you for both! Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, so much for the flight back to England . . . looks like plans have changed again for Tania and Grant. Which I'm sure will do flip flops many times for the years to come. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Well, so much for the flight back to England . . . looks like plans have changed again for Tania and Grant. Which I'm sure will do flip flops many times for the years to come. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Lol, no, the return to London is on the back burner for now! Thank you so much for that lovely sixth star, Ric, and the wonderful review. I'm glad you liked this part. I was worried putting it on here, but it seem that most have liked it. I'm glad you did, too. Warm hugs, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from blondie560
I wish I had 10 stars!! That was an awesome chapter! Grant was a total jerk(nicest word I could think of). For a smart man, he's really dumb! Why wouldn't he be worried that Lorna was in some kind of trouble and forced to give up the information? Why does he take a criminal's word without asking Lorna for her side of the story? Someone needs some therapy to get over his abandonment issues!
I always enjoy reading your English sayings vs our English sayings: You sit there in your posh seat, so up your own backside,
We would be cruder and say: sit there with your head up your ass! Or to be nicer, say: you sit there all high and mighty. Looking forward to next week! Take care Sandra and have a lovely week. I hope you are all settled in your new home. Hugs, Sally
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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I wish I had 10 stars!! That was an awesome chapter! Grant was a total jerk(nicest word I could think of). For a smart man, he's really dumb! Why wouldn't he be worried that Lorna was in some kind of trouble and forced to give up the information? Why does he take a criminal's word without asking Lorna for her side of the story? Someone needs some therapy to get over his abandonment issues!
I always enjoy reading your English sayings vs our English sayings: You sit there in your posh seat, so up your own backside,
We would be cruder and say: sit there with your head up your ass! Or to be nicer, say: you sit there all high and mighty. Looking forward to next week! Take care Sandra and have a lovely week. I hope you are all settled in your new home. Hugs, Sally
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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My husband came in when I whooped out laughing. When I read him what you said about his head up his ass, he laughed too. I'll have to come to you for some of those expressions. LOL, you're wonderful. Thank you so very much for this amazing review, Sally, and that sixth star. Your comments really did give me a giggle. Yes, you are right about Grant, he should have never taken Rapiers word. But, what do you expect from a man? Hmm. Sending you a humongous hug, dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx