Rocking Through the Ages
3-6-9 Contest entry24 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Davis
This is a very well written 3-6-9 piece.
The title and the theme of the poem- Rocking Through the Ages are effectively connected.
The chosen artwork is well suited in reinforcing the poem's theme.
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 28-May-2021
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This is a very well written 3-6-9 piece.
The title and the theme of the poem- Rocking Through the Ages are effectively connected.
The chosen artwork is well suited in reinforcing the poem's theme.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 28-May-2021
reply by the author on 28-May-2021
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your encouraging comments and review. Hugs and blessings.
Comment from royowen
I think we all dwell with that child, that has grown into a supposedly mature adult, but I dream as I did as a child, I still have plans and hopes, and what's more they will be fulfilled, perhaps not in this life...sigh! Well done Leann, beautifully written post, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-May-2021
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I think we all dwell with that child, that has grown into a supposedly mature adult, but I dream as I did as a child, I still have plans and hopes, and what's more they will be fulfilled, perhaps not in this life...sigh! Well done Leann, beautifully written post, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-May-2021
reply by the author on 28-May-2021
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Thank you, Roy. My grandma used to say that she felt like she was still 18 when she was in her 80s. I used to laugh at her, but now I totally understand. Thank you so much for your comments and review. Hugs.
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My grandson says to me, you?re old Bapa, you live in an old house, your fridge is old. (He really said that to his Nannie, who he adores)
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Haha
Kids can be so funny. My four year old granddaughter told me about six months ago, quotation mark you are my favorite old lady. "I'm only 50. :-)
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50 year olds are looking younger by the day..,I remember it well..,sigh.
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I first wrote a song when I was 45, never understood poetry until I was 68, you?re now a good poet Leann. I?ve still got lots to learn yet.
Comment from kahpot
Very well written, a journey through the generations, if I may your short Intro before the title " 3-6-9, 3-6-9, 3-6-9, contest entry? it is only a (3-6-9) contest entry as a 3-6-9 poem automatically must consist of three stanzas, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 28-May-2021
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Very well written, a journey through the generations, if I may your short Intro before the title " 3-6-9, 3-6-9, 3-6-9, contest entry? it is only a (3-6-9) contest entry as a 3-6-9 poem automatically must consist of three stanzas, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 28-May-2021
reply by the author on 28-May-2021
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Thank you so much for your comments and for educating me on this poetry styles title. I will go and fix it right away. Hugs.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Clever! Spot-on title for the theme--masterful metaphor of rocking chair as focus for the significant stages of life. Ingenious twist--comes full-circle!
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Clever! Spot-on title for the theme--masterful metaphor of rocking chair as focus for the significant stages of life. Ingenious twist--comes full-circle!
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Comment Written 28-May-2021
reply by the author on 28-May-2021
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Thank you, Elizabeth. Your reviews always lift me up. Hugs and blessings to you.