Our Last Goodbye
Dear God, how do I do this?32 total reviews
Comment from Leann DS
How terribly difficult this must have been for you. I'm so sorry for your loss. You did a really good job portraying some of the emotions and events of those last precious moments you had with Mike. Thank you so much for sharing this, and as always, hugs and blessings to you.
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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How terribly difficult this must have been for you. I'm so sorry for your loss. You did a really good job portraying some of the emotions and events of those last precious moments you had with Mike. Thank you so much for sharing this, and as always, hugs and blessings to you.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Leann, It was the most difficult story I have written and I forgot to take into consideration all the reviews I would have to answer. I'll probably electrocute myself with all the tears on my keyboard. Lol
Thanks for the lovely review and the shiny stars. I'll send them all to my Honey. Smiles, Carol
Comment from dmt1967
This is such a sad little story. I am so sorry for your loss and wish you well. It is hard to say goodbye to someone you love. Very well written. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Stay safe.
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This is such a sad little story. I am so sorry for your loss and wish you well. It is hard to say goodbye to someone you love. Very well written. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Stay safe.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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It was one of the hardest stories I have ever written. I forgot about the reviews I would need to answer. Probably will electrocute myself with the tears in the keyboard. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
A loss that will follow you all the days of your life, but hopefully the cherished memories can ease the pain a little as you envision his smile. Thanks for sharing.
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A loss that will follow you all the days of your life, but hopefully the cherished memories can ease the pain a little as you envision his smile. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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I am never without him. I returned to writing because he made me promise. He said I had stopped because of him and now I had to return and publish. I'll try to keep my promise. Smiles, Carol
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Oh! We have so much in common. I have an entire book of goodbyes to my beloved husband who passed away in August 2009 of Esophageal Cancer. I healed my broken heart through poetry about losing my forever love. I feel this one, Carol. Well done. Nancy:)
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Oh! We have so much in common. I have an entire book of goodbyes to my beloved husband who passed away in August 2009 of Esophageal Cancer. I healed my broken heart through poetry about losing my forever love. I feel this one, Carol. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Nancy, This was the hardest story I have ever written. The tears would not stop flowing. Then I forgot about all the reviews. I will probably be electrocuted from the soggy keyboard by the time I am done. LOL Smiles, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Heartrending. Our last goodbye indeed--you nailed the title and masterfully crafted this flash of your final scene. Vivid imagery of his moribund appearance and your grief.
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Heartrending. Our last goodbye indeed--you nailed the title and masterfully crafted this flash of your final scene. Vivid imagery of his moribund appearance and your grief.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
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I knew he was ready to leave, but I certainly wasn't ready to let go. I know it was the best for him, no more pain to deal with, but he left me with the biggest hole I've ever known. I miss him so much. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Anne Johnston
Thank you for sharing this sad memory, I know it must have been hard to write. My last goodbye to my husband was as they wheeled him from his room to surgery from which he did not recover. We sat by his bedside the last half hour, but he was not able to communicate with us. So thankful for the presence of the Lord that gave peace at that time.
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Thank you for sharing this sad memory, I know it must have been hard to write. My last goodbye to my husband was as they wheeled him from his room to surgery from which he did not recover. We sat by his bedside the last half hour, but he was not able to communicate with us. So thankful for the presence of the Lord that gave peace at that time.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Anne, There were so many times that I thought my last memory would be the same as yours, but he kept coming back to me. Even when doctors said it was impossible, it happened. I was shocked when one day we spent laughing so much I couldn't breathe and the next day he slipped into a coma and left. Thanks for the review. Smiles, Carol
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You are welcome
Comment from Sally Law
I'm sorry for no six yet again. I don't know how you wrote this either. When I wrote about the loss of Esther Grace, I was vanquished for the week. A tender one and surely the winner. Sending you my best today as always and extra hugs....
Sal XOs...XOs....
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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I'm sorry for no six yet again. I don't know how you wrote this either. When I wrote about the loss of Esther Grace, I was vanquished for the week. A tender one and surely the winner. Sending you my best today as always and extra hugs....
Sal XOs...XOs....
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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I expect to be electrocuted here shortly by all the tears on my keyboard. It wasn't easy (well, almost impossible) to write, but I forgot about all the reviews I would have to answer. I am flattered, but I have almost used a box of kleenex. He would be so proud, though. He wanted me to go back to writing... and here I am. My last promise to him and my mom is to publish... I think I will try self-publishing when my current story is done. Promises must never be broken. Smiles, Sally. Sending my love, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aw, Carol, you have been through so much sorrow. He was your soul mate, so he will be waiting for you. And you're right, he is with you still. Death holds no fear for me anymore. Not since my late husband died. I know there is more. Faith is a great thing, but knowing for sure is even nicer. Keep smiling my friend, that's what he'd want. Warm hugs and love. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Aw, Carol, you have been through so much sorrow. He was your soul mate, so he will be waiting for you. And you're right, he is with you still. Death holds no fear for me anymore. Not since my late husband died. I know there is more. Faith is a great thing, but knowing for sure is even nicer. Keep smiling my friend, that's what he'd want. Warm hugs and love. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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I'm probably about to electrocute myself with all these tears on my keyboard. LOL Wow! I didn't think it was going to be quite this hard to write and answer everyone. He wanted me to write...though he wouldn't want to be the center of my stories... I hope he's happy. Thanks for the encouragement. I need it! Trying to smile, Carol
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
This is horrible. Um... the writing is fine, of course, but I do not like the storyline. I cannot stand the thought of you having to endure allllll this pain. Pain on top of pain on top of pain. They say God doesn't give anyone more than they can bear. So, I am more and more impressed with how strong you are and what God thinks of you, dear one.
Just a tiny note:
--> Each beat of your heart screams, "(R)emember me(.)"
Now - MUST I wish you luck? Wait. Is this one entered in the contest for NOW or the one for November??? If it's for now - good luck, good luck, GOOD LUCK!!!! If it's for November.... well, then.... okaaayyy... good luck. (in tiny 8 point font).
--> ('cause I just entered that one.) ugh.
Sending you hugs. AND telling you once again -- I'm so glad God brought us together. I am blessed.
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reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Carol,
This is horrible. Um... the writing is fine, of course, but I do not like the storyline. I cannot stand the thought of you having to endure allllll this pain. Pain on top of pain on top of pain. They say God doesn't give anyone more than they can bear. So, I am more and more impressed with how strong you are and what God thinks of you, dear one.
Just a tiny note:
--> Each beat of your heart screams, "(R)emember me(.)"
Now - MUST I wish you luck? Wait. Is this one entered in the contest for NOW or the one for November??? If it's for now - good luck, good luck, GOOD LUCK!!!! If it's for November.... well, then.... okaaayyy... good luck. (in tiny 8 point font).
--> ('cause I just entered that one.) ugh.
Sending you hugs. AND telling you once again -- I'm so glad God brought us together. I am blessed.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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I am about to electrocute myself with the tears on the keyboard. LOL It was the most difficult story I have ever written. I didn't think about all the reviews I would have to answer. He would be so proud that I am writing again and I guess that makes it all worthwhile. I promised I would and that's what brought me back to FS... and I'm glad because I met you. (even if you want to be stingy with your good luck) Smiles, hugs and lots of love, always Carol
Comment from Susan Newell
Good-byes are so hard, and sometimes our loved ones won't take that final step until we give them permission. It hurts to let them go, but love tells us we must let them move on ahead of us. I'm sure he's watching over you, without pain and with full cognizance. You are to be commended for opening your heart and soul to all of us.
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Good-byes are so hard, and sometimes our loved ones won't take that final step until we give them permission. It hurts to let them go, but love tells us we must let them move on ahead of us. I'm sure he's watching over you, without pain and with full cognizance. You are to be commended for opening your heart and soul to all of us.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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I'm sitting here crying like an idiot while my keyboard is soaked. Next, I'll probably be electrocuted. it was the hardest story I've ever written. Like reliving it then and now. Thanks for the kind review and the shiny stars. I'll pass them on to my honey... Trying to smile, Carol
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Grief is earned and is proportional to our love. Cry it out, but turn from the keyboard. We do NOT want you electrocuted. I admire your ability to be so open.