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Comment from BethShelby
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You amaze me. This sounds like so much work. When do you ever have the time to write. I would think you deserve all the lavish praise you get because you much be wonder woman to get everything done.

 Comment Written 02-May-2021


reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    It's a lot of work but work I enjoy. I used to feed full factories and thousands of people at one time... of course, I had my honey and a crew. Now fifty is stretching it, and I wouldn't want to do it all the time...too old. But to help my son, it was worth it. Smiles, Carol
Comment from eliz100
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I enjoy reading about the filming of your son's movie. I bet it felt good to get your two cents in. There is no room for improvement. The picture does compliment your words.

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 Comment Written 02-May-2021


reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    good day! Yes, I had to be gracious and kind since they are interested in investing again, but I thought it tacky to discuss things like that when other people were nearby. But I controlled myself and waited till later and simply introduced myself. LOL Her look was priceless. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
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My goodness, Carol, is there anything that you can't do well? You are a woman of many talents, and you've written this story very well. I could just see the egg on the face of that woman!

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 Comment Written 02-May-2021


reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    Thanks, Judy. I had to remain calm and gracious since her husband did invest and is considering future investments too. I didn't want them to think we were using their money frivolously either. So I kindly introduced myself and let her have it! Smiles, Carol
reply by Judy Lawless on 02-May-2021
    lol. You were very subtle about it. Well done.