Betrayal
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Comment from aryr
This was a great continuation chapter, Sandra. I loved the way you broke up the different characters. And I do think Jeff is definitely interested in Monica, just the way Grant does Tania. This is really going great, it is easy to read and comfortable to understand. Well done. Blessings, hugs, smiles.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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This was a great continuation chapter, Sandra. I loved the way you broke up the different characters. And I do think Jeff is definitely interested in Monica, just the way Grant does Tania. This is really going great, it is easy to read and comfortable to understand. Well done. Blessings, hugs, smiles.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hi Alie, thank you so much for reading this part. I'm delighted you are still enjoying it. Yes, I have two romances on the go! I like to be different, lol. Sending you a hug, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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Different is definitely good, Sandra. Hug received. Take care, you are so welcome.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Great as always. Glad Monica has a body guard looking out for her as well as Tania. Seems it could be a long while before everyone is safe again. I've been off the site a while, stuff to do and I've been so tired. But didn't want to miss any chapters. Hope all is well with you.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Great as always. Glad Monica has a body guard looking out for her as well as Tania. Seems it could be a long while before everyone is safe again. I've been off the site a while, stuff to do and I've been so tired. But didn't want to miss any chapters. Hope all is well with you.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hi Rox, I'm sorry you're not feeling 100%, being tired can drag you down a lot. I'm so glad you didn't want to miss any chapters, that was an encouraging message! :)) All is fine here, I've had the first covid vaccine, the second one will be next month. Have you had one yet? You take care, my friend. Sending you a hug. Love Sandra xxx
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, I am so glad that Jeff is with Monica. He seems like he really has her best interests in mind. It sounds like she's in danger. Naturally, Tania's worried about Monica and herself. Hope they can trap Colin and his mother in their illegal actions.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Oh, I am so glad that Jeff is with Monica. He seems like he really has her best interests in mind. It sounds like she's in danger. Naturally, Tania's worried about Monica and herself. Hope they can trap Colin and his mother in their illegal actions.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Grant and Jeff will watch over the girls, which I'm sure they will take their minds off their situation. :)) Thank you so much, Helen, for this lovely review. I do appreciate it so much. Warm hugs, my friend, have a nice day. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Lordinajamjar
Oh Sandra, it has been a while since I read any of your stuff.
This offering definitely caught my attention. I have missed so many chapters but I feel like I walked in just when the plot is starting to thicken.
Great writing that really pulled me in. I shall definitely be watching for more. ð???
Best
John
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Oh Sandra, it has been a while since I read any of your stuff.
This offering definitely caught my attention. I have missed so many chapters but I feel like I walked in just when the plot is starting to thicken.
Great writing that really pulled me in. I shall definitely be watching for more. ð???
Best
John
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hi, John, thank you so much for coming along and reading this part. Your review has really made my day. Thank you were 'pulled in' is so encouraging. Thank you, my friend! Have a lovely day. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
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Thank you Sandra the pleasure was mine. I am sending warm hugs back to you. Won't it be great when this pandemic is finally in check. I hope you are staying safe.i get my second vaccination shot next week. Hoping I can visit UK later in the year to see my mum and siblings. Fingers crossed. Xxx
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I think things are beginning to lighten up here. More places are allowed to open, and by May, it should hopefully be somewhere normal again. But I think it'll be a new kind of normal. My second shot is on 22nd April, so about three weeks time. I'm sure you'll be able to come and see your family this year. It's a long time since I've had a real family get together. As you say, fingers crossed! xx
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This story is building. Romance is poking its head here with Monica and we know Grant is thrilled with Tania. They just have to keep under the radar until the trial, but that's a good month off. Good writing Sandra.
Ralf
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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This story is building. Romance is poking its head here with Monica and we know Grant is thrilled with Tania. They just have to keep under the radar until the trial, but that's a good month off. Good writing Sandra.
Ralf
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Ralf, for your lovely comments. I do like to have some romance, it lightens up the nasty bits. :)) Have a lovely day, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from royowen
People ate falling in love all over the place, Monica and Jeff, probably Grant and Tania. Jeff has found out that Colin's mother has hired a nasty who will do almost anything for money, and Now that Tania seems to be be safe on Grant's thst could still be found out too. Beautifully written Sandra, you brought back memories of tropical places we have holidayed, that we can't at the moment, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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People ate falling in love all over the place, Monica and Jeff, probably Grant and Tania. Jeff has found out that Colin's mother has hired a nasty who will do almost anything for money, and Now that Tania seems to be be safe on Grant's thst could still be found out too. Beautifully written Sandra, you brought back memories of tropical places we have holidayed, that we can't at the moment, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Client(')s accounts.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Love is in the air!! Lol. I decided that Monica should have some romance in her life, just as Tania will be. It's just Monica got in first! Thank you so much, Roy, for this lovely review and for pointing out that missing apostrophe. All sorted! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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Well done Sandra
Comment from BethShelby
It sounds like the danger isn't over and Monica may be the one in danger. I'm glad Jeff is determined to stick with her. I guess Grant will be getting word of this new development soon. Jeff and Monica have a romance developing. I'm really enjoying the story.
Beth
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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It sounds like the danger isn't over and Monica may be the one in danger. I'm glad Jeff is determined to stick with her. I guess Grant will be getting word of this new development soon. Jeff and Monica have a romance developing. I'm really enjoying the story.
Beth
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Things have changed, but Jeff is going to make sure that Monica is safe. Grant will do whatever it takes to make sure they are both safe. Thank you so much for this lovely review, Beth. I'm so pleased you are enjoying it. Have a lovely day, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xx
Comment from Jay Squires
she could see the desire and something else, affection? [Really? Would she see the desire first? He's been obviously showing her he cared by how he's taking care of her. I would think she would look in his eyes to detect desire for her. But maybe us Yanks see things backwards, LOL.]
You really lost your rag ... no, worse than that, you went ballistic! [I won't give you the American translation ...]
'The man who sent me this, who we call, Shadow, [I'd remove the comma before Shadow.]
Well... this is really starting to rev up. I like where the plot is going.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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she could see the desire and something else, affection? [Really? Would she see the desire first? He's been obviously showing her he cared by how he's taking care of her. I would think she would look in his eyes to detect desire for her. But maybe us Yanks see things backwards, LOL.]
You really lost your rag ... no, worse than that, you went ballistic! [I won't give you the American translation ...]
'The man who sent me this, who we call, Shadow, [I'd remove the comma before Shadow.]
Well... this is really starting to rev up. I like where the plot is going.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hi Jay, thank you so much for another lovely review. I removed the comma. I've had one reviewer ask me if those expressions mean the same as some she mentioned, which they did. (I'm sure they are different to the ones you are thinking of, though!! Lol) I've taken 'affection' out, too. Reading it in your review did make me laugh.
Thank you, my friend, it's always lovely to see your name in my reviews. Warm hugs, have a nice day. Sandra xxx
Comment from Gert sherwood
Calm before the storm?
A chapter in the book Betrayal
Betrayal Chapter 27
sandramitchell
You have given us a well written chapter to read chapter 27
Smiles to the part where Monica and Jeff are getting to find out what real romantic kiss feel like.
Gert
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Calm before the storm?
A chapter in the book Betrayal
Betrayal Chapter 27
sandramitchell
You have given us a well written chapter to read chapter 27
Smiles to the part where Monica and Jeff are getting to find out what real romantic kiss feel like.
Gert
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Yes, quite literally, too! Aw, thank you, Gert! I'm so pleased you enjoy a little bit of romance, but there is a bit of trouble ahead. Have a lovely day, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
What a rare treat to have a "love" scene that begins--and ends--with a romantic kiss. Mediocre writers on site--and alas, amongst the published "professional" contingent--resort to sadistic and salacious sleaze to compensate for dearth of talent. Thank you for not being among them. As always, gripping story--romance in the offing whislt danger lurks.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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What a rare treat to have a "love" scene that begins--and ends--with a romantic kiss. Mediocre writers on site--and alas, amongst the published "professional" contingent--resort to sadistic and salacious sleaze to compensate for dearth of talent. Thank you for not being among them. As always, gripping story--romance in the offing whislt danger lurks.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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I think I'm old fashioned when it comes to love scenes. I keep being told that 'sex sells' but there has to be just as many people out there that it turns off. My hubby told me to write what I'm comfortable with. It's so nice to read your view on it, too. Thanks, Liz. Yes, the girls are still in danger, but well protected. Thank you so much for this really nice review, my friend. Warm hugs! :)) Sandra xxx