With Each Path, A Healing Prayer
Despite life's challenges, so much for which to be grateful56 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
Oh, how strongly I can relate to the feelings you've expressed in this beautiful poem! I loved how you ended each detailed observation with a specific kind of prayer... hopeful, grateful, joyful, etc. and finally a healing prayer. How much we need that! A beautiful and inspiring piece Diane. I'm so glad I made it to FanStory today. ;") MM
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Oh, how strongly I can relate to the feelings you've expressed in this beautiful poem! I loved how you ended each detailed observation with a specific kind of prayer... hopeful, grateful, joyful, etc. and finally a healing prayer. How much we need that! A beautiful and inspiring piece Diane. I'm so glad I made it to FanStory today. ;") MM
Comment Written 15-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Oh, Adonna!
How happy I am that you "made it to FanStory today" as well! :)
This offering began as a Kyrielle, and then it took on a life of its own as I realized that each of the moments I describe are often accompanied by a prayer...
Thank you for your exceptional rating and complimentary review.
I just shared with Dorothy Farrell how I wish everyone had a "Miller's Pond" in their lives.
So pleased my offering resonated with you!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice images, diane.
-A deer and her fawn are so precious.
-Your notes are appreciated, too.
-A well written poem with
good nature imagery as you
create this word picture of
Miller's Pond and its inhabitants.
-It does sound like a very peaceful
place, and one that allows you
to reflect and get away from every day life.
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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-Very nice images, diane.
-A deer and her fawn are so precious.
-Your notes are appreciated, too.
-A well written poem with
good nature imagery as you
create this word picture of
Miller's Pond and its inhabitants.
-It does sound like a very peaceful
place, and one that allows you
to reflect and get away from every day life.
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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So pleased you enjoyed, Pam!
Thank you!
diane
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You are very welcome, diane.
Comment from robyn corum
Diane,
It's remarkable how I have been able to find so much solace in nature throughout this whole chaotic pandemic. It seems that perhaps nature has offered its blessings for you, as well. But how could it not!?
You do know about us collecting posts for the 2020 Covid Retrospective, right? I'm hoping to publish a book on how writers dealt with the craziness - seeking pieces from March of 2020 to now. I'd love for you to search your portfolio for anything - or anything more if you've already offered things. Thanks!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Diane,
It's remarkable how I have been able to find so much solace in nature throughout this whole chaotic pandemic. It seems that perhaps nature has offered its blessings for you, as well. But how could it not!?
You do know about us collecting posts for the 2020 Covid Retrospective, right? I'm hoping to publish a book on how writers dealt with the craziness - seeking pieces from March of 2020 to now. I'd love for you to search your portfolio for anything - or anything more if you've already offered things. Thanks!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Robyn.
I sent you two offerings...
diane
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Actually, I think you sent me four. But I feel certain you have more than that. If you look alllll the way back??
But I also need the name you want me to use and where you are writing from, please.
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Thanks,Robyn.
Will check
In the meantime:
Diane Kenel-Truelove
Traverse City, MI
Thank you!
diane
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Bouquets of Hope
It Doesn't Seem Like Christmas
(though I'd like you to consider 'Christmas 2020' or something since your first line is the same as the title)
In Renewal's Cathedral
To Mend this Broken Land
those are the ones I have right now.
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Hello Robyn,
Sure.
"Christmas 2020" is aok...
And then I'll send you my recent one...
With Each Path, A Healing Prayer...
Thank you
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Nah. I'll grab it.
Comment from Teri7
Diane, This is a very beautiful and well written poem you have penned about this wonderful place that was kind of like a refuge for you in the time of covid. You used great descriptive and heartfelt words and beautiful imagery. I am so glad you had a place to enjoy at that time. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Diane, This is a very beautiful and well written poem you have penned about this wonderful place that was kind of like a refuge for you in the time of covid. You used great descriptive and heartfelt words and beautiful imagery. I am so glad you had a place to enjoy at that time. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Hello Teri!
So very pleased my offering resonated with you!
Thank you for your exceptional rating and complimentary review!
I wish everyone had a "Miller's Pond!"
Thank you ever so much!
diane
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
With Each Path, A Healing Prayer
by Mrs. KT
Hello, Diane,
I understand how you feel. I pray every night to thank God for keeping my family and me safe and healthy. We all work at home and most of my family are vaccinated. I get mine tomorrow.
I like the presentation and word imagery...you paint a beautiful picture. Nice structure and rhyme.
Well done!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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With Each Path, A Healing Prayer
by Mrs. KT
Hello, Diane,
I understand how you feel. I pray every night to thank God for keeping my family and me safe and healthy. We all work at home and most of my family are vaccinated. I get mine tomorrow.
I like the presentation and word imagery...you paint a beautiful picture. Nice structure and rhyme.
Well done!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Gypsy!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Wishing you a beautiful week!
diane
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nature is such a big healer, and pandemic or not we need to be closer to it:"
In time, I shall return again.
God's treasured gifts, I yearn to share,
For in truth, they can mend life's pain;
With each path, a healing prayer." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Nature is such a big healer, and pandemic or not we need to be closer to it:"
In time, I shall return again.
God's treasured gifts, I yearn to share,
For in truth, they can mend life's pain;
With each path, a healing prayer." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Hello Iza!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from papa55mike
If my mind is clouded, the best thing I can do is take a walk. Buttercups and Robins tell me it's almost spring. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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If my mind is clouded, the best thing I can do is take a walk. Buttercups and Robins tell me it's almost spring. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 15-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Hello Mike!
Walking does wonders for one's mind and soul and total well-being!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for sharing your beautiful walk with us and showing us that these walks are times of prayer and meditation and restoration. Love your presentation and your sweet refrain of different kinds of prayer as you walk.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Thank you for sharing your beautiful walk with us and showing us that these walks are times of prayer and meditation and restoration. Love your presentation and your sweet refrain of different kinds of prayer as you walk.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Hello Helen!
This offering began as a Kyrielle and then took on a life of its own!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
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So cool when the poem takes a life of its own!
Comment from Possummagic
Absolutely beautifully written and thank you for sharing with us. This poem shows in great detail the wonders of the world no matter what small part of the world it shows. I really enjoyed your colourful, delightful words. Marie
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Absolutely beautifully written and thank you for sharing with us. This poem shows in great detail the wonders of the world no matter what small part of the world it shows. I really enjoyed your colourful, delightful words. Marie
Comment Written 15-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Hello Marie!
I am honored by your exceptional rating and thoughtful review.
I wish everyone had a "Miller's Pond" to visit...
So pleased my offering resonated with you!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from DonandVicki
Your Millers pond reminds me a lot of "Walden's pond" where he was able to retreat and meditate. We all should be so lucky as to have a place to find peace.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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Your Millers pond reminds me a lot of "Walden's pond" where he was able to retreat and meditate. We all should be so lucky as to have a place to find peace.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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Hello DonandVicki!
I wish everyone had a "Miller's Pond" or "Walden Pond" to retreat to and revitalize. It's been a salvation during this year of uncertainty and challenges.
Thank you!
diane