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Viewing comments for Chapter 80 "Planted Thoughts"Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from ESOSTINE
That was a well thought-through piece of poetry. Many a time in man's life, the worries and burdens that weigh him down are nothing but assumptions and presumptions created by his thought processes. A great job. Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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That was a well thought-through piece of poetry. Many a time in man's life, the worries and burdens that weigh him down are nothing but assumptions and presumptions created by his thought processes. A great job. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for your Support. Bless you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a poignant write and we are at the mercy of our thoughts and making them good thoughts is a wise exercise as life is too short to burden ourselves with bad thoughts, much enjoyed, a fine presentation, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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This is a poignant write and we are at the mercy of our thoughts and making them good thoughts is a wise exercise as life is too short to burden ourselves with bad thoughts, much enjoyed, a fine presentation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Review, Blessings.
Comment from Ella3020
I really love that..i think that was very well said and I can feel the emotional grasp of that poem ..the mind is definitely an amazing thing.really great job
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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I really love that..i think that was very well said and I can feel the emotional grasp of that poem ..the mind is definitely an amazing thing.really great job
Comment Written 04-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Glad you Enjoyed this poem offering, Blessings to you.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the picture. Each character has his/her own worries.
The poem says: "Worries, Burdens, Planted in your Mind,Crying for some attention, Your Brain's Invention?" Under the current pandemic environment, most everyone has some sort of problems. Hopefully the vaccines will save this world of pandemic attacks.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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I like the picture. Each character has his/her own worries.
The poem says: "Worries, Burdens, Planted in your Mind,Crying for some attention, Your Brain's Invention?" Under the current pandemic environment, most everyone has some sort of problems. Hopefully the vaccines will save this world of pandemic attacks.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Review. Bless you.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first word to the last.
This is what I call a food for thought poem..
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first word to the last.
This is what I call a food for thought poem..
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Bless you for your Support and Review.
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thank you may God keep you writing great stuff
Take care
Cookie
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Planted Thoughts
by QC Poet
Hello, QC,
Hablas español? Yo soy de españa.
Great entry for the 5 Line Poem contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Interesting presentation and picture. Most of us are slaves of our thoughts.... it's true. It's hard to quite the mind. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Planted Thoughts
by QC Poet
Hello, QC,
Hablas español? Yo soy de españa.
Great entry for the 5 Line Poem contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Interesting presentation and picture. Most of us are slaves of our thoughts.... it's true. It's hard to quite the mind. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Hablo Poquito pero entiendo buen, soy "Pochocaneze" LOL
Gracias. Blessings.
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Que bueno, encantada de concrete.
Comment from Modus Mos
Though complex with limited words, it professionally tells the reader that if you focus on the hardships of life, you will only focus on it, rather use the grit life has given, and forge a steel sword with it. In this case, use the pressure of hardships and endure by being creative. Everyone is different and it's okay to be unique. Thank you for the beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Though complex with limited words, it professionally tells the reader that if you focus on the hardships of life, you will only focus on it, rather use the grit life has given, and forge a steel sword with it. In this case, use the pressure of hardships and endure by being creative. Everyone is different and it's okay to be unique. Thank you for the beautiful poem.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Amen, Blessings for your Support and Review.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Hi QCP!
Very nice idea to combine another language as part of your post. The cartoon is especially notable for its diversity of thoughts.
Minor editorial comment: IMHO caps are unnecessary, except maybe for Mind and Brain.
Mark
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Hi QCP!
Very nice idea to combine another language as part of your post. The cartoon is especially notable for its diversity of thoughts.
Minor editorial comment: IMHO caps are unnecessary, except maybe for Mind and Brain.
Mark
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Review and Support, caps an old bad habit still working on it. Blessings.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, a very moot point in your fine five line contest entry, I think your great powers of observation have nailed mankind's problem. The guy with the happy smile without a care is a standout. Well done, great job, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Oh yes indeed, a very moot point in your fine five line contest entry, I think your great powers of observation have nailed mankind's problem. The guy with the happy smile without a care is a standout. Well done, great job, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Bless you for your Continued Support and Reviews.
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Well done
Comment from T.A. Walk
I am always fascinated by wordsmiths that can amaze with only a few words. This is a great piece, and begs the question truly. I do believe that more of our worries and burdens are placed on us by ourselves. I know as I struggle for clarity with my PTSD, this is a common question. Great read, thank you!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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I am always fascinated by wordsmiths that can amaze with only a few words. This is a great piece, and begs the question truly. I do believe that more of our worries and burdens are placed on us by ourselves. I know as I struggle for clarity with my PTSD, this is a common question. Great read, thank you!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thanks for your Support and Review, Some of Like us learn to like on things to make everything else seem normal, I suppose. Bless you.