Heart Crafted Poems -2021
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love your poem and the form looks like a beautiful hour glass and matter which way you turn the result is the same way:"Snow,
natures quilting
covering, a shield
protecting falling leaves.
Yellow, red, orange, aglow,
constantly decaying, morphing
nourishing elixir feeding
seedling, tree, forest" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
I love your poem and the form looks like a beautiful hour glass and matter which way you turn the result is the same way:"Snow,
natures quilting
covering, a shield
protecting falling leaves.
Yellow, red, orange, aglow,
constantly decaying, morphing
nourishing elixir feeding
seedling, tree, forest" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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I am so very honored to receive your validation thank you.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Palindrome or Mirrored Poetry speaks nature and status of the season winter, snow falling checks the going of the season with falling of trees; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
This Palindrome or Mirrored Poetry speaks nature and status of the season winter, snow falling checks the going of the season with falling of trees; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thanks friend
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and very well written Mirrored Poem you have penned about snow. I love the picture you used also. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
This is a very nice and very well written Mirrored Poem you have penned about snow. I love the picture you used also. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thank you Teri.
Comment from Anne Johnston
I like what you have done with this palindrome, must take a lot of concentration. You have used some very descriptive words to describe the snow. I especially like "nature's quilting" in the second line. Such a beautiful cover for our world.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
I like what you have done with this palindrome, must take a lot of concentration. You have used some very descriptive words to describe the snow. I especially like "nature's quilting" in the second line. Such a beautiful cover for our world.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Hi Anne, thank you! Yes, this poetic style is a taskmaster.
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You are welcome
Comment from royowen
I think you've done a superb job with this palindrome poem Jim, you've also managed to create a great shape with it. An excellent reversal of the poem's theme, makes it an admirable example. Beautifully written my friend, Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
I think you've done a superb job with this palindrome poem Jim, you've also managed to create a great shape with it. An excellent reversal of the poem's theme, makes it an admirable example. Beautifully written my friend, Blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thank you, it was a taskmaster for certain.
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Well done
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear JLR, I found this poetic dance, this palindrome, fascinating. I wanted to let you know that I spent quite a bit of time seeing how you reversed each line so cleverly. I think it must've taken some care and time, for you to find a subject that would let you do this, to it. But I have learned this about you, you love a challenge.
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
Dear JLR, I found this poetic dance, this palindrome, fascinating. I wanted to let you know that I spent quite a bit of time seeing how you reversed each line so cleverly. I think it must've taken some care and time, for you to find a subject that would let you do this, to it. But I have learned this about you, you love a challenge.
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
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I do thank you! It was a surprising taskmaster!
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors.
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors.
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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I do thank you for your review and time taken to comment.
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You're welcome!