Awakenings
15 Syllable poem33 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
When we get right downtown it when mope is all you have, you turn to the Lord to be able to keep the faith that things will get better in time.
It is all you can do.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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When we get right downtown it when mope is all you have, you turn to the Lord to be able to keep the faith that things will get better in time.
It is all you can do.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Hi Barbara. Your words are so true. Our hope has to be in the Lord... and we can pass that hope on to others too. Thank you.
Melissa
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Hi Barbara. Your words are so true. Our hope has to be in the Lord... and we can pass that hope on to others too. Thank you.
Melissa
Comment from kahpot
How very true, the hope and happiness we pass onto others does drag us along with it, this is a very meaningful poem, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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How very true, the hope and happiness we pass onto others does drag us along with it, this is a very meaningful poem, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Hello there!! Thank you, sweet friend, for your wonderful review. Hugs.
Melissa
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Hello there!! Thank you, sweet friend, for your wonderful review. Hugs.
Melissa
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Well written 15 syllable poem. Awakening hope in others penetrates the darkest gloom. Such beautiful words. Lovely photo of burning candles to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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This is a Well written 15 syllable poem. Awakening hope in others penetrates the darkest gloom. Such beautiful words. Lovely photo of burning candles to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Hi Joanne. Thank you for your lovely review.
Melissa
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Hi Joanne. Thank you for your lovely review.
Melissa
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from CD Richards
Nice job with this 15 syllable poem, Melissa. Very appropriate choice of image to bolster the theme. I always think I'd hate to be judging one of these short-form contests. Best of luck to you with those who are! Craig
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Nice job with this 15 syllable poem, Melissa. Very appropriate choice of image to bolster the theme. I always think I'd hate to be judging one of these short-form contests. Best of luck to you with those who are! Craig
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Hey Craig...thanks, my friend. It is a challenge to try to write something meaningful. I appreciate you!!
Melissa
Comment from GE Parson
Great job of writing a 15 syllable poem, that conveys a message. Awakening hope in others penetrates gloom, discouragement, anger, sadness and on and on it could go.
You know what, I originally gave you a 5 star rating, but the more I think about the truth of your poem, I'm going to raise it to a 6 rating.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Great job of writing a 15 syllable poem, that conveys a message. Awakening hope in others penetrates gloom, discouragement, anger, sadness and on and on it could go.
You know what, I originally gave you a 5 star rating, but the more I think about the truth of your poem, I'm going to raise it to a 6 rating.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Oh, you have made my day GE. Thank you so very much... I am very glad it meant something to you !!
Melissa
Comment from Sharon Nolen
You nailed it. It is 15 syllables and actually shares a message. When I think about it, if a person is experiencing a dark season in their life, it is usually because they can't see any hope. It takes another person sometimes to awaken hope in someone else.
Thanks for making me think.
Great job!!!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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You nailed it. It is 15 syllables and actually shares a message. When I think about it, if a person is experiencing a dark season in their life, it is usually because they can't see any hope. It takes another person sometimes to awaken hope in someone else.
Thanks for making me think.
Great job!!!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Hello Sharon. I really, really appreciate your sensitive review... you really encouraged me!!
Melissa
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You are so welcome.
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Oh, this is very nice. So much truth and wisdom in just a few words. I see it's an entry into the 15 syllable contest. All the best of luck with that.
Cheers!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Oh, this is very nice. So much truth and wisdom in just a few words. I see it's an entry into the 15 syllable contest. All the best of luck with that.
Cheers!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Hi Erika. Thanks so much. I am delighted you like it!!
Melissa
Comment from Irish Rain
So true.
Even we we are down, or grieving,
if we take our eyes off ourselves,
and reach out to help others...
it helps them and us.
Awakened hope for everyone!
Loved this,
blessings...
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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So true.
Even we we are down, or grieving,
if we take our eyes off ourselves,
and reach out to help others...
it helps them and us.
Awakened hope for everyone!
Loved this,
blessings...
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Hi Judy. Thank you sweet friend. I really appreciate it. I hope you all did not get snowed in there ... we got five inches here in Chester (3 miles south of Richmond). Loving it! :)
Melissa
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I love the snow too! We got 5-7 inches...I hope we get more! Have a nice week!
Comment from Mark D. R.
Melissa,
This is a dramatic poem in just 15 syllables. A light at the end of the dark tunnel is always a possibility to envision.
Best wishes in the contest voting.
Mark
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Melissa,
This is a dramatic poem in just 15 syllables. A light at the end of the dark tunnel is always a possibility to envision.
Best wishes in the contest voting.
Mark
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Hello Mark. Thanks so very much, my friend!
Melissa
Comment from zanya
It's such an effective use of the confined format of fifteen syllables to portray a sense of real and meaningful hope, however dark and gloomy life may become -lovely pic
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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It's such an effective use of the confined format of fifteen syllables to portray a sense of real and meaningful hope, however dark and gloomy life may become -lovely pic
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Hello Zanya!! Thanks so very much!
Melissa