Rain, Rain Go Away
A day from rain to clear skies75 total reviews
Comment from Vanna1
You did a great job of using the words required. Sounds like a fun time for a young girl. Good visuals. Good presentation. Great entry. Thanks for sharing.
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You did a great job of using the words required. Sounds like a fun time for a young girl. Good visuals. Good presentation. Great entry. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You managed to include the words well with this active poem. The painting or photo fits very well with your words.
'at rain's cessation, stared at the stars
an exhilarating exhibit'...................................nice touch
Ralf
blinded by lighting,>>do you mean 'lighning'
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You managed to include the words well with this active poem. The painting or photo fits very well with your words.
'at rain's cessation, stared at the stars
an exhilarating exhibit'...................................nice touch
Ralf
blinded by lighting,>>do you mean 'lighning'
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
This is a very nice poem using all the required words assigned. I love the whole poem, it sounds like rain to me. Very nice images. of rain, lightning, and stars.
The abstract photo of rain is magical' it's bright and bold. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Have a nice weekend,
Cindy
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This is a very nice poem using all the required words assigned. I love the whole poem, it sounds like rain to me. Very nice images. of rain, lightning, and stars.
The abstract photo of rain is magical' it's bright and bold. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Have a nice weekend,
Cindy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from MissMerri
Oh my goodness! You managed something impossible here. All the required words are used in this short poem and it only has 29 words total! The She in your story had a busy day, and all of it described in a few lines. Amazing! Good luck with this contest. You ought to win a prize for this accomplishment. MM
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Oh my goodness! You managed something impossible here. All the required words are used in this short poem and it only has 29 words total! The She in your story had a busy day, and all of it described in a few lines. Amazing! Good luck with this contest. You ought to win a prize for this accomplishment. MM
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from Mia Twysted
I had to familiarize myself witht he word "cessation." It has to do with endings, okay. So, as I walk through this I see a girl, no a woman. She is going through her day dealing with all the obstacles that are in front of her.
She bids her time and puts in the time and for it recieves wonderious awards that bestill her heart.
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I had to familiarize myself witht he word "cessation." It has to do with endings, okay. So, as I walk through this I see a girl, no a woman. She is going through her day dealing with all the obstacles that are in front of her.
She bids her time and puts in the time and for it recieves wonderious awards that bestill her heart.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from lyenochka
You captured a poetic description of one moment in time in such a brief poem with all the required words! You met this contest's challenge very well. Hope you do well in the contest!
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You captured a poetic description of one moment in time in such a brief poem with all the required words! You met this contest's challenge very well. Hope you do well in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You have used several literary techniques. Your alliteration is clever, very consistent. The reader is invited to speculate what the character's occupation. What was the daunting task of this person? This could be fodder for a short story. Well done.
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You have used several literary techniques. Your alliteration is clever, very consistent. The reader is invited to speculate what the character's occupation. What was the daunting task of this person? This could be fodder for a short story. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
Nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, having lucid as well perfectly matching the theme phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Picture complements the theme.
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Hello Friend,
Nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, having lucid as well perfectly matching the theme phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Picture complements the theme.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from Gloria ....
This is great, author. I like the montage you painted using the required words in the contest. So much depended on her sipping a soda, standing by the building in the rain.
Great job and I wish you much luck with the voters. :)
Gloria
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This is great, author. I like the montage you painted using the required words in the contest. So much depended on her sipping a soda, standing by the building in the rain.
Great job and I wish you much luck with the voters. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Use these words writing prompt contest. You did a good job using the words: Soda, rain, building, stars, exhilarating, done.
I like the imagery of rain...
Good luck in the contest.
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Hello anonymous
Use these words writing prompt contest. You did a good job using the words: Soda, rain, building, stars, exhilarating, done.
I like the imagery of rain...
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021