Seven Little Kitties
Mischief in the kitchen28 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Seven Little Kitties', is a delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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'Seven Little Kitties', is a delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this nice review, it's very appreciated. :)
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Dear Anon,
You're very welcome. :)))
Comment from Patty Palmer
What a cute little poem! Kind of like five little monkeys jumping on the bed. One fell off and bumped his head. Mama called the doctor and the doctor said, NO MORE MONKEYS JUMPING ON THE BED!
Then four little monkeys.....and so on, But your kitties baking cookies is so much cuter than that! Good luck with the contest!
Stay healthy!
Patty
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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What a cute little poem! Kind of like five little monkeys jumping on the bed. One fell off and bumped his head. Mama called the doctor and the doctor said, NO MORE MONKEYS JUMPING ON THE BED!
Then four little monkeys.....and so on, But your kitties baking cookies is so much cuter than that! Good luck with the contest!
Stay healthy!
Patty
Comment Written 17-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thank you, I really love cats and cookies, so this came naturally. Lol Thanks for reading my poem. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
First of all I have to say I love kitties! This poem was hilarious and adorable! Love the picture you choose for this poem as well. Please never stop writing these. Im your biggest fan! This poem deserves 6 stars but I ran out of 6s.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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First of all I have to say I love kitties! This poem was hilarious and adorable! Love the picture you choose for this poem as well. Please never stop writing these. Im your biggest fan! This poem deserves 6 stars but I ran out of 6s.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thank you, I'll take a raincheck..lol. I really appreciated this wonderful review.:)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a fun poem, Mystery Writer. I love the picture. I could see my little kitties doing much the same. This is a great contest entry for children. Counting poem are always fun if written right, and your is perfect. There is good flow, good rhymes, adorable image, and a fun way to countdown. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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What a fun poem, Mystery Writer. I love the picture. I could see my little kitties doing much the same. This is a great contest entry for children. Counting poem are always fun if written right, and your is perfect. There is good flow, good rhymes, adorable image, and a fun way to countdown. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this great review, I appreciate it so much. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Okay! So this is the most adorable thing I have ever read! That sweet little kitty at the end still shared the cookies even though the others gave up! What a good little kitty friend! If this doesn't win then I don't even know what! You have a gem here! Should be a children's book!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Okay! So this is the most adorable thing I have ever read! That sweet little kitty at the end still shared the cookies even though the others gave up! What a good little kitty friend! If this doesn't win then I don't even know what! You have a gem here! Should be a children's book!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thank you, I would love to have this in a book, it would be like a dream. :)
Comment from zanya
Here's a wonderful entry for the Children's Rhyming Poem contest - no kid could resist these delightful kittens and their baking escapades - and an opportunity to count! Just wish I had 6 left - this one has to be in the winner's enclosure
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Here's a wonderful entry for the Children's Rhyming Poem contest - no kid could resist these delightful kittens and their baking escapades - and an opportunity to count! Just wish I had 6 left - this one has to be in the winner's enclosure
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it. Cats and baked goods are two of my favorite things.. and wild geese with the moon on thier wings of course. I really appreciate this nice review. :)
Comment from LisaMay
Yeah, that's right - turn up when the job's doneI That last kitty will grow up to be a hard-working Mommy, looking after everyone else's needs sacrificially. I enjoyed your poem's storytelling and rhyming.
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Yeah, that's right - turn up when the job's doneI That last kitty will grow up to be a hard-working Mommy, looking after everyone else's needs sacrificially. I enjoyed your poem's storytelling and rhyming.
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this nice review. My first thought was monkeys, but I think that's been done a lot..lol. Thanks again for reading. :)
Comment from LJbutterfly
It's a good thing the last kitty was kind and generous, because all the kitties left her/him to finish the baking and wash the dishes. This poem was too cute. As a retired early childhood teacher, I can clearly see this poem as a colorful story book for children. It would also work well as a counting tool with the appropriate number kitties on the opposite page of the poem. My classes would have loved it. Best wishes in the contest.
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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It's a good thing the last kitty was kind and generous, because all the kitties left her/him to finish the baking and wash the dishes. This poem was too cute. As a retired early childhood teacher, I can clearly see this poem as a colorful story book for children. It would also work well as a counting tool with the appropriate number kitties on the opposite page of the poem. My classes would have loved it. Best wishes in the contest.
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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This is high praise indeed, coming from a teacher! I'm so grateful for your insightful comments and kind words. Have a wonderful evening. :)