Comment from Alli Johnston

Excellent

The picture you chose to depict your words of art was a fantastic choice. Your poem created an image just like that of what you chose. Flung, shimmering shards of glass, this line made me imagine someone either above or below the night sky, picking handfuls of light out of a bag and tossing it like confetti. You conveyed such a beautiful image in so few words.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021

Hello Alli... thanks so much for our wonderful review... I liked the confetti comment. :)

Melissa

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Crystals against a backdrop of blue velvet - great imagery. Ladies' night out at the opera. Very dramatic - I loved it! Very well crafted entry for the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021

Thanks so much, June. So glad you enjoyed this short one. :)

Melissa

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This was thst perfectly connecting narrative and artwork, working together in harmony to create a great 5/7/5 poem, as a great entry in this contest, well done Melissa, good luck, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021

Hey Roy... thanks so much. I am glad you liked it. :)

Melissa

reply by royowen on 04-Jan-2021

Most welcome

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Wishing I could see that picture bigger than my phone screen. I'm sure your poem describes it perfectly. It must be stunning the sparkling against the dark skies. Best wishes in the contest!

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 Comment Written 04-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021

Thanks so much, Helen. Yes, the larger photo has a vast array of stars to take your breath away. :)

Melissa