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Comment from roof35
Oh, so some I am sad. Thomas Warburton was my favorite character. I was so hoping for him and Heather. Perhaps Peter Allen will take his place in Heather's heart.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Oh, so some I am sad. Thomas Warburton was my favorite character. I was so hoping for him and Heather. Perhaps Peter Allen will take his place in Heather's heart.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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You have a shock coming very shortly - a pleasant one I hope. Many thanks for this six-star review of the new story.
Comment from Judy Lawless
I'm looking forward to reading this new book. I was wondering why all the marks for explanations, but when I saw them at the end of the story, I understood. Being a Canadian, and raised in the Anglican Church, all of these references were already familiar to me. lol
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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I'm looking forward to reading this new book. I was wondering why all the marks for explanations, but when I saw them at the end of the story, I understood. Being a Canadian, and raised in the Anglican Church, all of these references were already familiar to me. lol
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Most of the references will not be in any published version of this but as so many of our readers are from the USA I felt it necessary to add explanations her. Many thanks for your review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Jim, this is a great first part to the second book. You have certainly vetted my appetite for knowing what all this is about. So, now we know that Tom Warburton died during the war to end all wars. I'm looking forward to what's next. Merry Christmas. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Hi Jim, this is a great first part to the second book. You have certainly vetted my appetite for knowing what all this is about. So, now we know that Tom Warburton died during the war to end all wars. I'm looking forward to what's next. Merry Christmas. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Glad to have held your interest with the start of this second work of the trilogy. Many thanks for this positive review.
Comment from damommy
I'm already hooked on what promises to be a very interesting book. I'm eager to read more, and I promise to keep up better this time. Merry Christ to you, Paddy, and Penny. I hope Santa is good to you three.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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I'm already hooked on what promises to be a very interesting book. I'm eager to read more, and I promise to keep up better this time. Merry Christ to you, Paddy, and Penny. I hope Santa is good to you three.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the review and your good wishes. May you and all those animals of yours have a great Christmas.
Comment from nomi338
Sorry to hear that Tom Warburton is no longer among the living. Nonetheless I am excited to learn of what new happenings will be taking place in the tiny town of Cleeborough St Mary. At any rate I am ready to get involved. So, please sir author, entertain me.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Sorry to hear that Tom Warburton is no longer among the living. Nonetheless I am excited to learn of what new happenings will be taking place in the tiny town of Cleeborough St Mary. At any rate I am ready to get involved. So, please sir author, entertain me.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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I promise to do my best to do just that. Thank you so much for reviewing this fresh start.
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Despite my disappointment over the loss of a favored character. I am still all in on this stirring story.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I am so happy to see you are posting again and even though it is 25 years later perhaps we will get some background as to what happened to those people we learned to love in "The Maid of the Mill." Starting off with Tom W. Well done, Jim. I look forward to this story as well. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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I am so happy to see you are posting again and even though it is 25 years later perhaps we will get some background as to what happened to those people we learned to love in "The Maid of the Mill." Starting off with Tom W. Well done, Jim. I look forward to this story as well. Nancy:)
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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It won't be long before the past is reawakened, I assure you. Thank you so much for awarding six stars to this first chapter of the new book.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
So, Tom W died serving his country. I never expected that. I am wondering exactly what is going on here. How are Heather and Tom W supposed to get together if he's dead and how is he going to inherit her father's farm??? I can't wait for the answers.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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So, Tom W died serving his country. I never expected that. I am wondering exactly what is going on here. How are Heather and Tom W supposed to get together if he's dead and how is he going to inherit her father's farm??? I can't wait for the answers.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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You know what curiosity did to the cat? Lol. Many thanks for reviewing and your continued interest.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The author is an excellent story teller. I like the opening of reviewing "The search of a woman." It definitely draws my attention to read onto find out more about it.
The conversation between Allen and Charles are good and easy to follow. Also it interests readers to know what happens next when they get together soon.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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The author is an excellent story teller. I like the opening of reviewing "The search of a woman." It definitely draws my attention to read onto find out more about it.
The conversation between Allen and Charles are good and easy to follow. Also it interests readers to know what happens next when they get together soon.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing this.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The author is an excellent story teller. I like the opening of reviewing "The search of a woman." It definitely draws my attention to read onto find out more about it.
The conversation between Allen and Charles are good and easy to follow. Also it interests readers to know what happens next when they get together soon.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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The author is an excellent story teller. I like the opening of reviewing "The search of a woman." It definitely draws my attention to read onto find out more about it.
The conversation between Allen and Charles are good and easy to follow. Also it interests readers to know what happens next when they get together soon.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing this.
Comment from BethShelby
This sounds like it will be an excellent story. I sorry to learn that Tom didn't survive the way. It seems like life didn't intend to turn out well for him. I will interested to read your chapters.
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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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This sounds like it will be an excellent story. I sorry to learn that Tom didn't survive the way. It seems like life didn't intend to turn out well for him. I will interested to read your chapters.
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Comment Written 24-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2020
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Thank you for coming back for a second dose. That war took so many young men.