The Dip
A Quadrilew poem24 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
Oh yes, this remind me of how my wife and I would dance to Artie Shaw and his band many years ago. No big bands anymore.
Very nicely done. Merry Christmas. May you have a blessed year.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Oh yes, this remind me of how my wife and I would dance to Artie Shaw and his band many years ago. No big bands anymore.
Very nicely done. Merry Christmas. May you have a blessed year.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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I love big bands. I was brought up doing ballroom dancing. Growing up I was hard to find partners. Thanks, Ben.
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My Mary and I did well and I loved dancing to the bands. Our last together was at the Melody Ball Room in Oklahoma City.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A perfect Quadrilew. How cute this is with the inference of what the French Onion Dip is noted for and all the imagery you create as it heads toward its goal.
"To me, I do implore,
join me hip to hip,
and by applause galore,
we'll French onion dip."
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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A perfect Quadrilew. How cute this is with the inference of what the French Onion Dip is noted for and all the imagery you create as it heads toward its goal.
"To me, I do implore,
join me hip to hip,
and by applause galore,
we'll French onion dip."
Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you. Glad you like it.
Comment from poetwatch
I got to dance to this one, Yvonne. Write something new and mix something older, warm those lines shoulder-to-shoulder, all for a smile. This is a good entry for the club. It looks inviting. I see what comes up. :) Thank you for sharing. Have a Merry Christmas or Happy Holiday.
Jose
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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I got to dance to this one, Yvonne. Write something new and mix something older, warm those lines shoulder-to-shoulder, all for a smile. This is a good entry for the club. It looks inviting. I see what comes up. :) Thank you for sharing. Have a Merry Christmas or Happy Holiday.
Jose
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Thank you for a lovely review.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Yvonne, which came first?...the picture or the poem...
they go together like a hand and a glove...
what could make this romantic dance any better?...
but a bag of Frito Lay potato chips...
I love your poem my sweet friend...
and love the picture...very well written sweet girl...
love you...Linda xxoo
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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Hi Yvonne, which came first?...the picture or the poem...
they go together like a hand and a glove...
what could make this romantic dance any better?...
but a bag of Frito Lay potato chips...
I love your poem my sweet friend...
and love the picture...very well written sweet girl...
love you...Linda xxoo
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2020
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The picture came first. hahaha. I' so glad you liked it.
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very clever...I do that a lot...paint from the pictures I find...smiling...love xxoo