Betrayal
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Well done! I hope she outfoxes the sneaky SOB--my guess is she's setting him up somehow--meantime, doesn't seem she's recorded anything incriminating. I'm hooked.
Thistlegates most definitely are [is] not sexist
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Well done! I hope she outfoxes the sneaky SOB--my guess is she's setting him up somehow--meantime, doesn't seem she's recorded anything incriminating. I'm hooked.
Thistlegates most definitely are [is] not sexist
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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No, he hasn't come right out and mentioned the missing plans he'd stolen from her, which is what she needs. More to come! Thank you so much for this lovely review, Liz, and bless you for pointing out that error. Now corrected! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, Colin, is doing more than eating fish--he's fishing for details with his questioning/responses. I believe Tania handled all of the conversation well, Sandra. You give readers many pertinent details about the plans, etc. I believe Colin knows full well that Tania has the plans/designs and yes, he is trying to get hold of them to do???? To figure out how he can untangle the mess he has caused himself with his stealing of the plans--so far that is what it looks like to me. It would be interesting to find out if he is innocent of the theft. . . .hmmm!
Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Well, Colin, is doing more than eating fish--he's fishing for details with his questioning/responses. I believe Tania handled all of the conversation well, Sandra. You give readers many pertinent details about the plans, etc. I believe Colin knows full well that Tania has the plans/designs and yes, he is trying to get hold of them to do???? To figure out how he can untangle the mess he has caused himself with his stealing of the plans--so far that is what it looks like to me. It would be interesting to find out if he is innocent of the theft. . . .hmmm!
Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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I love that! Colin is doing more that eating fish--he's fishing for details! LOL. Thank you so much, Jan, for another really lovely review. I am always appreciative of your input. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sandra.
Now we know what Colin is all about. You already convinced me that he was in the bad corner and now at lunch, he shows what corner he is in.
This is good entry get the lunch table. It was an interesting conversation at lunchtime. There's an old saying in athletics that you can't tell your players without a program. Now we have the program, I think.
I look forward to seeing how Tonia handles this.
Robert
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Hello Sandra.
Now we know what Colin is all about. You already convinced me that he was in the bad corner and now at lunch, he shows what corner he is in.
This is good entry get the lunch table. It was an interesting conversation at lunchtime. There's an old saying in athletics that you can't tell your players without a program. Now we have the program, I think.
I look forward to seeing how Tonia handles this.
Robert
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Yes, now Colin is well and truly in and will make his presence known big time. Thank you so very much for your lovely review, Robert, I really appreciate your support. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from aryr
A great continuation chapter Sandra. I loved the detail in which you went to describe Tania's preparation, so she had a calm look rather than an overworked look. Poor Colin is truly an idiot and falling right into her hands. I do wonder what he is planning but I can wait. Hugs, smiles and blessings.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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A great continuation chapter Sandra. I loved the detail in which you went to describe Tania's preparation, so she had a calm look rather than an overworked look. Poor Colin is truly an idiot and falling right into her hands. I do wonder what he is planning but I can wait. Hugs, smiles and blessings.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much, Alie, for another of your really wonderful reviews. One of them is in for a big surprise. Sending you a hug, my friend, and wishing you a wonderful week. :)) Sandra xx
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You are very welcome Sandra, this is an enjoyable read. Hugs back at you and you and yours have a great week, blessings.
Comment from robyn corum
Sandra,
Very interesting chapter - I'm afraid to find out what Colin may have up his sleeve. Yuck!
This was well-composed and definitely entertaining!
Notes:
1.) She shivered and pulled her jacke(t) closer.
2.) 'So, tell me what you've been up (to) since I last saw you.
3.) either(,)' he said as he lifted his glass.
Thanks!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Sandra,
Very interesting chapter - I'm afraid to find out what Colin may have up his sleeve. Yuck!
This was well-composed and definitely entertaining!
Notes:
1.) She shivered and pulled her jacke(t) closer.
2.) 'So, tell me what you've been up (to) since I last saw you.
3.) either(,)' he said as he lifted his glass.
Thanks!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Aw, thank you, Robyn. I'm so glad you enjoyed this part. Things are going to hot up now. You are so nice to have pointed out those errors. I've made the corrections now. Sending you a big warm hug, my friend. Have a wonderful day. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from JudyE
Please, please, please hurry with the next chapter! lol
Just three points/suggestions:
Thistlegates most definitely are not sexist, racist, or any other 'ist. You're good enough--in my books, anyway!' - quote needed after 'ist. Should be 'or any other 'ist'. You're good enough...'
It wasn't hard, most of my architect friends knew. - replace comma with a period
Why don't you give them to me, perhaps I can find a way to get Thistlegates to take a look. - question mark after 'me'
Stay safe
Judy
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Please, please, please hurry with the next chapter! lol
Just three points/suggestions:
Thistlegates most definitely are not sexist, racist, or any other 'ist. You're good enough--in my books, anyway!' - quote needed after 'ist. Should be 'or any other 'ist'. You're good enough...'
It wasn't hard, most of my architect friends knew. - replace comma with a period
Why don't you give them to me, perhaps I can find a way to get Thistlegates to take a look. - question mark after 'me'
Stay safe
Judy
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much, Judy, for those lovely six stars, and the really helpful review. I'm made the corrections. :) I think you'll like the next part ... or not! Lol. Thanks dear friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Cindy Warren
I guess it was Colin after all. And the fool thinks he's hit the jackpot! I'm sure when Grant hears that tape, he'll have no doubt. He'll have to squirm and apologize. Love it!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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I guess it was Colin after all. And the fool thinks he's hit the jackpot! I'm sure when Grant hears that tape, he'll have no doubt. He'll have to squirm and apologize. Love it!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Cindy. Colin thinks he has it all under control, but then again, so does Tania. One of them is wrong. :)) I'm so pleased you are enjoying my story, my friend, you are so supportive, and I really appreciate you. Warm hugs, have a lovely day. Sandra xxx
Comment from blondie560
Just when it was getting good you throw a cliff hanger in it! You're killing me! Lol. Looking forward as always to the next chapter. All the best! Sally
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Just when it was getting good you throw a cliff hanger in it! You're killing me! Lol. Looking forward as always to the next chapter. All the best! Sally
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much, Sally, for reading this part, I'm really glad you enjoyed it and want more, that is so encourageing. Something happens next time. :)) Have a lovely week, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from damommy
Shucks! This ended too soon. I'm afraid he can get those plans somehow. I was so tense all through lunch. hahaha. I'm still a little afraid of him. No telling what he'll come up with. You always develop such interesting and realistic characters.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Shucks! This ended too soon. I'm afraid he can get those plans somehow. I was so tense all through lunch. hahaha. I'm still a little afraid of him. No telling what he'll come up with. You always develop such interesting and realistic characters.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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You are right to be afraid of him, Yvonne, he's not a nice man at all. Thank you so much my dear sister across the pond, for this lovely review and all those pretty stars. You are my favourite sister!! :)) Sending you much love, and a warm hug. :)) Sandra xx
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Bless your heart! Thank you for being my friend and sister across the pond. Always good to hear from you.
Comment from Ben Colder
he dines into the ploy and now comes the fun.
I was amazed while reading the dinner treat and no doubt before Mask time. LOL. I wonder how we writers are going to handle this.
Good one as always Sandy.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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he dines into the ploy and now comes the fun.
I was amazed while reading the dinner treat and no doubt before Mask time. LOL. I wonder how we writers are going to handle this.
Good one as always Sandy.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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I know, how dare they not wear their masks!!! LOL, This is set a few years before the virus, lol. I'll have to come up with a new story after this with the lockdowns and the virus in it. It could be quite a horror story! Thank you so very much for the six lovely stars, and this lovely review, my wonderful friend. Warm hugs and love. Sandy xxx