Wistful Willows
a 3-6-9 poetic form33 total reviews
Comment from royowen
You've really made exceptional use of W alliteration and a sweetly themed suite of three six nine stanzas. And the one word, three syllable combination, with sweet memories in mind, well done, good luck Melissa, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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You've really made exceptional use of W alliteration and a sweetly themed suite of three six nine stanzas. And the one word, three syllable combination, with sweet memories in mind, well done, good luck Melissa, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thank you Roy. I went crazy with the letter W. LOL, but it was fun to try it. I appreciate your review and comments, dear friend. Blessings to you!
Melissa
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Good onya
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
Yours is a lovely poem. It has a very nice lilting quality that works well with the theme of your work. The alliteration of the letter "W" also helps give your poem a music of its own. Willows swaying in the breeze is my favorite sight image.
I like it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Yours is a lovely poem. It has a very nice lilting quality that works well with the theme of your work. The alliteration of the letter "W" also helps give your poem a music of its own. Willows swaying in the breeze is my favorite sight image.
I like it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Hi Cynthia! Thank you for your wonderful comments and yes... I went crazy with the letter W. :). Such fun. LOL
Melissa
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If you're going to go crazy with a letter, "w" is a good choice.
Think: wealth, wisdom, weight-appropriate to height.
(All of which I covet :)
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Hahaha!!!
M
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Blessings to you and yours :)
Comment from robyn corum
Melissa,
Small poems like this are not my favorite, to be honest. I ADORE haiku and senryu, but that is a whole different subject. The random collection of syllables to create poems often leads to complete nonsense - words put together for the sake of the count rather than the message.
But you always rise above, don't you? *smile*
You've managed to perfectly capture the syllable count that's required, offer some rhyming and poetic devices AND a lovely COMPLETE picture, too. I think this is great and should do well. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Melissa,
Small poems like this are not my favorite, to be honest. I ADORE haiku and senryu, but that is a whole different subject. The random collection of syllables to create poems often leads to complete nonsense - words put together for the sake of the count rather than the message.
But you always rise above, don't you? *smile*
You've managed to perfectly capture the syllable count that's required, offer some rhyming and poetic devices AND a lovely COMPLETE picture, too. I think this is great and should do well. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Hi Robyn. Thanks bunches!! I did go crazy with the Ws, but it was fun and made it more of a challenge. Glad you liked it!!
Melissa
Comment from damommy
What a lovely scenario. I'd like to be there. There's something about the weeping willow that's comforting. Very good alliteration and rhyme. Beautiful photo to go with it.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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What a lovely scenario. I'd like to be there. There's something about the weeping willow that's comforting. Very good alliteration and rhyme. Beautiful photo to go with it.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Hi Yvonne... thank you... I am in a dreamy state of mind. LOL. :)
Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
A lovely triple 3-6-9, perfectly suited for the contest. A beautiful offering! Looks like a winner! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sal XOs.....
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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A lovely triple 3-6-9, perfectly suited for the contest. A beautiful offering! Looks like a winner! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sal XOs.....
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Hello Sally. Thank you for the lovely thoughts. I am in a dreamy state of mind today. LOL. :)
Melissa
Comment from Pantygynt
Reminds me of summer days on my daughter's narrow boat a couple of years ago when no one had heard of coronavirus and we could go where we wanted when we wanted.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Reminds me of summer days on my daughter's narrow boat a couple of years ago when no one had heard of coronavirus and we could go where we wanted when we wanted.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thank you Jim... may those peaceful days return to you again!
Melissa
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Very beautiful 3-6-9 poem. Nice flow and rhyme scheme. Whenever willows sway in the breeze, wafting on currents on air with ease. Whomever we loved will come to mind , while under the willows we recline. Well done. Beautiful photo.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Very beautiful 3-6-9 poem. Nice flow and rhyme scheme. Whenever willows sway in the breeze, wafting on currents on air with ease. Whomever we loved will come to mind , while under the willows we recline. Well done. Beautiful photo.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Hi Joanne. Thanks so much!!
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
I really do like this format and you have used it successfully to capture the wistfullness of gentler times now gone - replaced by the heaviness of recent days. The snow piling up on the willow branches is perfect. The beauty of it all is willow trees bend - and its flexibility is what will save it. We can learn from that...
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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I really do like this format and you have used it successfully to capture the wistfullness of gentler times now gone - replaced by the heaviness of recent days. The snow piling up on the willow branches is perfect. The beauty of it all is willow trees bend - and its flexibility is what will save it. We can learn from that...
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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What a wonderful review, June. I really liked your comments about the willow tree and how it bends and adapts ~ like we must! You should write about that somehow!! Thanks!
Melissa
Comment from Boogienights
This is beautiful, I love willow trees. There is such a peaceful air about them and I love the sound that's made when the wind stirs them. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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This is beautiful, I love willow trees. There is such a peaceful air about them and I love the sound that's made when the wind stirs them. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thank you!! I really appreciate your comments!!
Melissa
Comment from judiverse
Great entry for the contest. I like the words you used to start each stanza. The rhythm is excellent. Lovely imagery of willows swaying in the breeze. The willows bring a feeling of wistfulness and bring thoughts of a loved one to those who sit underneath. Correct use of whomever! Beautifully worded. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Great entry for the contest. I like the words you used to start each stanza. The rhythm is excellent. Lovely imagery of willows swaying in the breeze. The willows bring a feeling of wistfulness and bring thoughts of a loved one to those who sit underneath. Correct use of whomever! Beautifully worded. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Hi Judi. Thank you... I am feeling dreamy and wistful while I sit beside a sunny window and write poetry. I appreciate your thoughts about this one. :)
Melissa
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You're very welcome. judi