Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 92 "There, A Bit of Magic Hides"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Very good Yvette. Lovely words that follow on smoothly the words of June's Chapter 91. Good use of both metaphor and alliteration. This will make quite a book when it is finished - Well done you LOL! Love Dorothy xx
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Very good Yvette. Lovely words that follow on smoothly the words of June's Chapter 91. Good use of both metaphor and alliteration. This will make quite a book when it is finished - Well done you LOL! Love Dorothy xx
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Dorothy! ;) Have an awesome weekend, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from June Sargent
What a wonderful bit of whimsy! Among the frolicking deer, we have leprechauns hiding their pot of gold! With the same rainbow smiling over them all. You did a terrific job with this follow up. Loved it!
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What a wonderful bit of whimsy! Among the frolicking deer, we have leprechauns hiding their pot of gold! With the same rainbow smiling over them all. You did a terrific job with this follow up. Loved it!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, June! ;) Have an awesome weekend, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from wishawave
I enjoy reading this lovely poem. The image of the rainbow is beautiful and Is matching the imaginary visions described in the poem. " wise leprechaun smiles" that's very eye catching.
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I enjoy reading this lovely poem. The image of the rainbow is beautiful and Is matching the imaginary visions described in the poem. " wise leprechaun smiles" that's very eye catching.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this short one, wishawave -- so good of you to stop by! ;) Be sure to drop in again some time and have an awesome weekend in your corner of the universe!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation, Yvette.
-It's nice to see Gypsy's
book still continuing.
-A well written poem
with a good topic.
-The leprechaun does
have a very good
reason to smile.
-I like the concluding line, too.
-Well done!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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-Very nice image
and presentation, Yvette.
-It's nice to see Gypsy's
book still continuing.
-A well written poem
with a good topic.
-The leprechaun does
have a very good
reason to smile.
-I like the concluding line, too.
-Well done!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Pam! ;) Have an awesome weekend, my lady!! ;) Yvette
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You are very welcome, Yvette, and you have a good weekend, too. It is supposed to be very cold here-40's for tomorrow. Brrrrrr!
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yes Yvette, that yellow golden pot is elusive, but your selected photograph and verse make up for me not finding the same. Methinks that leprechauns are more mischievous than wise.
Of course, I have never met one or sought his sage advice.
Good addition to this chapter collaboration. I do favor the 5-7-5 form to the 7-7 couplet (-;
Mark
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Yes Yvette, that yellow golden pot is elusive, but your selected photograph and verse make up for me not finding the same. Methinks that leprechauns are more mischievous than wise.
Of course, I have never met one or sought his sage advice.
Good addition to this chapter collaboration. I do favor the 5-7-5 form to the 7-7 couplet (-;
Mark
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Mark! ;) Have an awesome weekend, sir!! ;) Yvette
Comment from papa55mike
That's amazing, to have a multi-author book of poetry. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture you chose. Best of luck with your writing! I wish I had a six for you.
Have a great dayand God bless.
mike
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That's amazing, to have a multi-author book of poetry. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture you chose. Best of luck with your writing! I wish I had a six for you.
Have a great dayand God bless.
mike
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Mike! ;) Have an awesome weekend, sir!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
There, A Bit of Magic Hides
by Y. M. Roger
Hello, Yvette,
Thank you very much for adding a chapter to the Renga book. It's a lovely fantasy 5/7/5. We are getting to the end of this book but I will start a new one. Good syllable count and connection between lines. The presentation is beautiful.
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There, A Bit of Magic Hides
by Y. M. Roger
Hello, Yvette,
Thank you very much for adding a chapter to the Renga book. It's a lovely fantasy 5/7/5. We are getting to the end of this book but I will start a new one. Good syllable count and connection between lines. The presentation is beautiful.
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this one, Gypsy -- look forward to a new one! ;) Have an awesome weekend, my lady!! ;) Yvette
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You too :)
Hugs
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Bubbling and burbling with joy and let's paste a rainbow for good luck and bring forward leprechaun to make the poem winning:) Thank you so much for sharing and good luck with your wrtings.
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Bubbling and burbling with joy and let's paste a rainbow for good luck and bring forward leprechaun to make the poem winning:) Thank you so much for sharing and good luck with your wrtings.
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Iza! ;) Have an awesome weekend, my lady!! ;) Yvette