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Football - A Novel

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A mother faces life's struggles.

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Comment from lancellot
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Good morning scene, shows progression of some of the characters and give more insight on Katherine and Gabriel.

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"Just checking. That's what Mom's do." She [back] out of the driveway.

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 Comment Written 18-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the kind catch. I've made the change.