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Comment from Dean Kuch
Fantastic alliteration in such a short, concise poem!
Poetic prose sings out, like the children of the night, in search of their next unsuspecting victim.
Fabulously presented, blood, scarlet red on ebony black background...
This one has it all!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Fantastic alliteration in such a short, concise poem!
Poetic prose sings out, like the children of the night, in search of their next unsuspecting victim.
Fabulously presented, blood, scarlet red on ebony black background...
This one has it all!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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I appreciate your encouraging words.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)
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You are most welcome, my friend! Excellent work.
Comment from Senyai
Wow, Anupam, this is excellent! Second line is especially intriguing
love luminal life-liquor
As a whole this 5-7-5 is quite good. Best to you in the contest.
Foxey
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Wow, Anupam, this is excellent! Second line is especially intriguing
love luminal life-liquor
As a whole this 5-7-5 is quite good. Best to you in the contest.
Foxey
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)
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You're quite welcome.
Comment from chasennov
'Revival Of The Red.' I'm surprised at the authors every time I read about Vampires. I'm wondering whether they really believe in anything so inhuman?
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'Revival Of The Red.' I'm surprised at the authors every time I read about Vampires. I'm wondering whether they really believe in anything so inhuman?
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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The belief varies from person to person.Thanks for your words and excellent review:-)
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You're welcome to the review. I'm sure it does. What a pity.
Comment from Cookie333
Yes, these critters have always held a place in my imagination. Your piece depicts their actions (leeches-suck; blood-life liquor). A unique piece, and I wish you well in the contest,
k
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Yes, these critters have always held a place in my imagination. Your piece depicts their actions (leeches-suck; blood-life liquor). A unique piece, and I wish you well in the contest,
k
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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thanks for your thoughts and excellent review:)
Comment from Auroraboreal800
Love the structure of this piece. The contrast of color is very dramatic. About the poem... Well, I didn't know there were good vampires. Interesting poem!
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Love the structure of this piece. The contrast of color is very dramatic. About the poem... Well, I didn't know there were good vampires. Interesting poem!
:)
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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thanks for your thoughts and excellent review:)
Comment from Titan Black
Why does it have to be all about the devil?
Your haiku was good. And the poetic alliteration.
But I just can't get with the lustful darkness of
It all. But to each his own.
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Why does it have to be all about the devil?
Your haiku was good. And the poetic alliteration.
But I just can't get with the lustful darkness of
It all. But to each his own.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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it isn't a haiku.thanks:)
Comment from Insane Membrane
I really like this ... love the leech analogy and ref to life liquor . Its hard to say a lot in these so very short poems but you have done it very well
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I really like this ... love the leech analogy and ref to life liquor . Its hard to say a lot in these so very short poems but you have done it very well
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
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thanks for your thoughts and excellent review:)
Comment from Darkhorse555
from the darkened picture in its dark attire falling in your blushing lusty writting loves liquor resurrects a lovely piece i enjoyed
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from the darkened picture in its dark attire falling in your blushing lusty writting loves liquor resurrects a lovely piece i enjoyed
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
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thanks for your thoughts and excellent review:)
Comment from Aussie
Interesting supernatural poem. I didn't know there were good vampires - to be living forever would be a terrible existence to watch your friends get old and die and the vampire goes on forever - well done poet.
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Interesting supernatural poem. I didn't know there were good vampires - to be living forever would be a terrible existence to watch your friends get old and die and the vampire goes on forever - well done poet.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
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thanks for your thoughts and excellent review:)
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Anupam
A deep, dark write ... and so good. Love the presentation which is perfect for your poem...... and the image is superb.
Love all the 'l' alliteration .... really sets the mood and creates excellent arousal of the audial senses when read loud .... one can almost savour the thought of that lusty bite (a male vampire for me) .... heheheh! Excellent assonance with 'a, e, i, o, u". Life-liquor" tingles the taste buds .... you have strong arousal of the senses and evoke great emotions of the more macabre kind. I just wrote a poem about leeches, not yet posted .... we must be on the same wave-length ...... spooky.
A continuation with the great alliteration, this time of 'r'. Really this is fabulous ... I like it a lot and nice to see you can go from the spiritual to the supernatural genre with expertise. I can see nothing to alter ... outstanding. Good luck in the contest.
Warm Regards - Lovinia xoxo
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Hi Anupam
A deep, dark write ... and so good. Love the presentation which is perfect for your poem...... and the image is superb.
Love all the 'l' alliteration .... really sets the mood and creates excellent arousal of the audial senses when read loud .... one can almost savour the thought of that lusty bite (a male vampire for me) .... heheheh! Excellent assonance with 'a, e, i, o, u". Life-liquor" tingles the taste buds .... you have strong arousal of the senses and evoke great emotions of the more macabre kind. I just wrote a poem about leeches, not yet posted .... we must be on the same wave-length ...... spooky.
A continuation with the great alliteration, this time of 'r'. Really this is fabulous ... I like it a lot and nice to see you can go from the spiritual to the supernatural genre with expertise. I can see nothing to alter ... outstanding. Good luck in the contest.
Warm Regards - Lovinia xoxo
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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awww....coming from you,it holds the greatest importance:).i have no words to express how elated i am...like being on cloud nine.i appreciate each and every single word of yours.it means a lot to me.a hearty thank you for this exceptional and generous rating.
regards:)
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My pleasure. Love the poem. :))) Lovinia xoxoxo
