Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Amazing how kids can find fun in just anything available. Seeing pumpkins as you share makes me think of the headless horseman in a Walt Disney film.
Thanks for sharing.

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020

thanks, not only for your neat comment, but also for bringing back a fond memory.

Comment from L. Kalere

Excellent

Very cute story with good dialog between the siblings. Also, a nice way to finish it up with "I'm hungry". Good luck in the contest. The artwork couldn't have been better.
Congratulations.

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 Comment Written 13-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020

thank you very much! I see you're a new member. Welcome!

reply by L. Kalere on 13-Oct-2020

Thank you. I'm on a steep learning curve, but enjoying it.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Ha, this is a truly creative approach to this subject. I liked how Annie and Joey finally came to agreement and some gummy worms were dangling out of the eyes and mouth.

The ending is pitch perfect.

Wishing you much luck in the booth. :)

Gloria

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020

Thanks, Gloria, for your very nice comments and good wishes!