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Viewing comments for Chapter 82 "Red..."Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from judiverse
That is such a graphic illustration. It shows the punishment that was used in times gone by. Slaves were whipped. Those who received the lashings bore the scars forever. Your syllable count is right on, and the use of the color of blood is powerful. You make use of alliteration with blood and bite. judi
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That is such a graphic illustration. It shows the punishment that was used in times gone by. Slaves were whipped. Those who received the lashings bore the scars forever. Your syllable count is right on, and the use of the color of blood is powerful. You make use of alliteration with blood and bite. judi
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much Judi, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from DeboraDyess
This is a great addition to the poem, Roy. It meets the syllable requirement for your stanza, of course, and is beautiful in it simplicity.
Now I"m off to read the one just before you!
HOpe y'all are doing well. :)
BLessings,
Deb
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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This is a great addition to the poem, Roy. It meets the syllable requirement for your stanza, of course, and is beautiful in it simplicity.
Now I"m off to read the one just before you!
HOpe y'all are doing well. :)
BLessings,
Deb
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much Deb, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This poem made me think of Jesus' sufferings He endured just for us. How grateful and thankful I am for His willingness to suffer for me.
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This poem made me think of Jesus' sufferings He endured just for us. How grateful and thankful I am for His willingness to suffer for me.
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Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
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Thanks Rebecca, for these delightful comments and review, blessings Roy
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You're quite welcome!
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, I never like to think about the Lord's suffering even before the cross but it was all part of His payment for our sins. Your illustration makes the poem's meaning clear. Thankful and humbled by His great sacrifice.
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Oh, I never like to think about the Lord's suffering even before the cross but it was all part of His payment for our sins. Your illustration makes the poem's meaning clear. Thankful and humbled by His great sacrifice.
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Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much Helen, for these delightful comments and review, blessings Roy