Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 79 "For There is Only You"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is excellent--a really lovely poem! The message conveyed is delightful--that moonlight, not darkness, is the primary "personality trait" of nighttime. Great figures of speech
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This is excellent--a really lovely poem! The message conveyed is delightful--that moonlight, not darkness, is the primary "personality trait" of nighttime. Great figures of speech
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Such awesome comments, Janice, thank you!! ;) :) Thanx for stopping by, my lady, and take care! Here's sending wishes for a Wednesday of wonderment!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A magical reflection here as the moon dances on the water and the two of them make more light to brighten the night, much enjoyed Yvette, love Dolly x
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A magical reflection here as the moon dances on the water and the two of them make more light to brighten the night, much enjoyed Yvette, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thanx for stopping in on this short one, Dolly! ;) Take care and may you have Wednesday of wonderment!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem in addition to the multi-author book of Renga. The moon's reflection in the water gives her a virtual dance partner in the dark night sky.
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem in addition to the multi-author book of Renga. The moon's reflection in the water gives her a virtual dance partner in the dark night sky.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your review, Sandra -- your support is important to me: THANX!! ;) Yvette
Comment from lyenochka
I really liked your 5-7-5 especially your "moonlight's dance partner." You made the night time feel magical and of course, you chose the perfect picture to illustrate!
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I really liked your 5-7-5 especially your "moonlight's dance partner." You made the night time feel magical and of course, you chose the perfect picture to illustrate!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
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Thanx for stopping in on this short one, Helen -- you know me, gotta throw in that bit of magic! ;) Take care and may you have Wednesday of wonderment, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Cindy Decker
Yvette,
This is an awesome 5-7-5 poem. First of all, the photo and lettering are actually calming, allaying any fears one may have of the night.
The last line gives the reader a beautiful image of the moon and darkness, dancing until daybreak.
Wonderful work, Yvette.
Best wishes, Cindy
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Yvette,
This is an awesome 5-7-5 poem. First of all, the photo and lettering are actually calming, allaying any fears one may have of the night.
The last line gives the reader a beautiful image of the moon and darkness, dancing until daybreak.
Wonderful work, Yvette.
Best wishes, Cindy
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Such lovely comments, Cindy, and those bright stars: I am honored, my lady!! ;) :) Thanx so much for stopping by for some 'Dancing in the Dark'... I enjoy these shorties for a 'breath of fresh air', ya know!! ;) :) Take care and may you have Wednesday of wonderment!! ;) Yvette
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Thank you for the best wishes, Yvette. Have a great Thursday.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Breathtaking! Fresh and elegant imagery--a tour de force in three lines. Larger than darkness--moonlight's dance partner--startling phrasing! A fine addition! Cheers. LIZ
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Breathtaking! Fresh and elegant imagery--a tour de force in three lines. Larger than darkness--moonlight's dance partner--startling phrasing! A fine addition! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thanx for stopping in on this short one, LIZ -- always good to hear from you, sir! ;) Take care and may you have Wednesday of wonderment!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a beautiful moon and its reflection. What a great poem to go with.
Yes. A beautiful moon will need a dance partner, which could be his shadow or any creatures that is awake at night.
You inspired me to post mine 7-7 that I wrote before for this book but didn't have a chance.
I wrote about sun light.
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What a beautiful moon and its reflection. What a great poem to go with.
Yes. A beautiful moon will need a dance partner, which could be his shadow or any creatures that is awake at night.
You inspired me to post mine 7-7 that I wrote before for this book but didn't have a chance.
I wrote about sun light.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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You can still post it!! It's over there in Gypsy's portfolio - jump on in!! ;) Thanx for stopping by, Lisa, and may you have Wednesday of wonderment!! ;) Yvette
Comment from L. Kalere
I loved your 5-7-5 contribution to the renga. It's quite beautiful in every sense. The artwork is stunning and a perfect addition. One question though (I'm still a newbie): Where's the kigo in the 7-7, or perhaps that is not the first chapter?
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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I loved your 5-7-5 contribution to the renga. It's quite beautiful in every sense. The artwork is stunning and a perfect addition. One question though (I'm still a newbie): Where's the kigo in the 7-7, or perhaps that is not the first chapter?
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
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Good Evening, L. Thank you for such a wonderful review and especially for those shining stars!! ;) Yes, a good question: the logo is only reqired/present in the initial 5-7-5 verse of the renga. ;) Take good care of you out there and have a wonderful rest of the week!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nightmare essence echoes round. Wow. What a beautiful image and I can feel the sound of the nightmare. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings. So sorry that I'm out of sixð???
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Nightmare essence echoes round. Wow. What a beautiful image and I can feel the sound of the nightmare. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings. So sorry that I'm out of sixð???
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
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Such lovely comments, Iza - I am honored with your virtual six, my lady! ;) Thanx for stopping in on this shortie... I enjoy these for a 'breath of fresh air', ya know!! ;) :) Take care and may you have Wednesday of wonderment!! ;) Yvette
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:) I am waiting for anew chapter from your wolfie fantasy boos:)
Comment from Bill Pinder
Excellent poem for the multi author book using this unique style. Thanks for sharing your creativity with your well chosen words and the perfect picture and mix of colors to present it.
Bill
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Excellent poem for the multi author book using this unique style. Thanks for sharing your creativity with your well chosen words and the perfect picture and mix of colors to present it.
Bill
Comment Written 05-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
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Thanx for stopping in on this short one, Bill -- always to good to hear from you, sir! ;) Take care and may you have Wednesday of wonderment!! ;) Yvette