Walking the Moon Home
A sonnet inspired by lines from As You Like It17 total reviews
Comment from oliver818
This is a very beautiful and touching poem, I enjoyed reading it. I really enjoyed the imagery you used. The sonnet style is clearly respected and this makes a very good entry for the love poem competition. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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This is a very beautiful and touching poem, I enjoyed reading it. I really enjoyed the imagery you used. The sonnet style is clearly respected and this makes a very good entry for the love poem competition. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review and good wishes.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am often inspired by Shakespeare and you wrote a fine sonnet based on the depth of emotion you felt here Mary. I love the thought that life is an endless sweet beginning. Your poem ended on a high and I enjoyed the ride home with the moon, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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I am often inspired by Shakespeare and you wrote a fine sonnet based on the depth of emotion you felt here Mary. I love the thought that life is an endless sweet beginning. Your poem ended on a high and I enjoyed the ride home with the moon, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, Dolly. Six stars from a sonneteer like you is indeed an honor.
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You are welcome Mary, well earned, love Dolly x
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Comment from RodG
I really like the nostalgic tone of this sonnet, Mary, commemorating that first walk together in the moonlight a couple had that is fondly remembered years later. I especially like how you describe their conversation in stanza two. And I applaud your flawless meter. Rod
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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I really like the nostalgic tone of this sonnet, Mary, commemorating that first walk together in the moonlight a couple had that is fondly remembered years later. I especially like how you describe their conversation in stanza two. And I applaud your flawless meter. Rod
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful and kind review. I really appreciate it.
Comment from wishawave
When two lovers are together, aimless walking also become so meaningful. Since the heart is open , it adds a layer of shining light to even the most mundane things.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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When two lovers are together, aimless walking also become so meaningful. Since the heart is open , it adds a layer of shining light to even the most mundane things.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for your very thoughtful review. You have neatly summed up the poem .
Comment from pome lover
that is truly wonderful! You are a brilliant poet. Your words are music to the ear and and total delight to read.
Thank you for sharing it.
I read it again. Going to copy and paste to read later, when I hopefully find out who wrote it.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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that is truly wonderful! You are a brilliant poet. Your words are music to the ear and and total delight to read.
Thank you for sharing it.
I read it again. Going to copy and paste to read later, when I hopefully find out who wrote it.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review and for the lovely stars as well.
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and thank you, Mary Furlong!
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Comment from equestrik
What a beautiful invitation you have given here. This is simpe and beautiful love and one would be a fool not to accept your invitation. Best of luck to you in the contest.
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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What a beautiful invitation you have given here. This is simpe and beautiful love and one would be a fool not to accept your invitation. Best of luck to you in the contest.
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for your very kind review. I appreciate your thoughts and good wishes.
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for sharing this poetic expression of "walking the moon home." And how clever to take a line from As You Like It to create this lovely love sonnet! Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you for sharing this poetic expression of "walking the moon home." And how clever to take a line from As You Like It to create this lovely love sonnet! Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it as well as your good wishes.