Love the Great Hunter
A love poem27 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Your poem made me smile - it's a warning that's very practical. I appreciate it because it's not syrupy sweet overly romantic view of love but it covers the power of love on its effect of people. Nice abcb rhyme with lots of alliteration!
Best wishes in the contest!
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Your poem made me smile - it's a warning that's very practical. I appreciate it because it's not syrupy sweet overly romantic view of love but it covers the power of love on its effect of people. Nice abcb rhyme with lots of alliteration!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
Comment from Eternal Muse
You described so many forms and manifestations of love, from the good to not so good (smile). Great rhymes, meter and flow
You think you are strong.
In love, you'll not fall.
But, Love uses soft eyes,
to make fools of us all.
I felt that like color text font on that light blue background was a bit jarring to the eye - I would pick a darker color personally.
Good luck in the contest - this was excellent
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You described so many forms and manifestations of love, from the good to not so good (smile). Great rhymes, meter and flow
You think you are strong.
In love, you'll not fall.
But, Love uses soft eyes,
to make fools of us all.
I felt that like color text font on that light blue background was a bit jarring to the eye - I would pick a darker color personally.
Good luck in the contest - this was excellent
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
Comment from Sugarray77
You did a superb job in crafting this verse for the Love Poem prompt. I like the comparison and contrast you used... the pull and push of love that made you wary. Well written and a perfect entry for this contest.
Melissa
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You did a superb job in crafting this verse for the Love Poem prompt. I like the comparison and contrast you used... the pull and push of love that made you wary. Well written and a perfect entry for this contest.
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
Comment from Minglement
Wow,I enjoyed this entry for the love poem contest, though at first I wanted to cry for its bitter r message of hurt. But you redeemed it, in the pivot of the last poignant verse ) well done. Good luck in the contest.
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Wow,I enjoyed this entry for the love poem contest, though at first I wanted to cry for its bitter r message of hurt. But you redeemed it, in the pivot of the last poignant verse ) well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Love the Great Hunter
by lancellot
Hello, Lancellot,
Your entry for the Love Poem Poetry Contest is a two sided sword. Is love good or bad? Is it both simultaneously? It's an interesting thought. Good luck in the contest.
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Love the Great Hunter
by lancellot
Hello, Lancellot,
Your entry for the Love Poem Poetry Contest is a two sided sword. Is love good or bad? Is it both simultaneously? It's an interesting thought. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Love Poem contest.
This lovely verse is very nicely written.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Love Poem contest.
This lovely verse is very nicely written.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Love is funny or it's sad,
Love is quiet or it's mad.
It's a good thing, or it's bad,
but it's beautiful. [Lovely old song]
Yes love can hurt or be wonderful.
Well done, Lance. Nancy:)
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Love is funny or it's sad,
Love is quiet or it's mad.
It's a good thing, or it's bad,
but it's beautiful. [Lovely old song]
Yes love can hurt or be wonderful.
Well done, Lance. Nancy:)
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written love poem. True love should be sweet with moonshine and roses with no fights or arguments but it only happens that way in movies and fairy tales.
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A very well-written love poem. True love should be sweet with moonshine and roses with no fights or arguments but it only happens that way in movies and fairy tales.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
Comment from Ignatius Albright
"Love uses soft eyes,
to make fools of us all."
The entirety of this poem is so unrelentingly real, I really like your style of writing!!
This piece is captivating honest raw moving beautiful with the surprising twist at the end, well done my friend!
Keep writing and keep safe, much love Ignatius A
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"Love uses soft eyes,
to make fools of us all."
The entirety of this poem is so unrelentingly real, I really like your style of writing!!
This piece is captivating honest raw moving beautiful with the surprising twist at the end, well done my friend!
Keep writing and keep safe, much love Ignatius A
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your vividly descriptive, skillfully-composed poem uses realistic, specific details to reveal the many "forms" of love, its great ad varied powers.
Note: In stanza 5, "bring" and "send" need an "s."
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Your vividly descriptive, skillfully-composed poem uses realistic, specific details to reveal the many "forms" of love, its great ad varied powers.
Note: In stanza 5, "bring" and "send" need an "s."
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020