The Better Solution
The law isn't always the best idea.17 total reviews
Comment from sammielwf
A silent by deadly verdict for a dealer of addiction. Powerful stuff my friend. Powerful stuff!
I like and support in earnest this contest entry- but despise the reality of the topic!
Well done teols- good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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A silent by deadly verdict for a dealer of addiction. Powerful stuff my friend. Powerful stuff!
I like and support in earnest this contest entry- but despise the reality of the topic!
Well done teols- good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your support.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
With using only 80 words, you were able to give the reader a full story of the prisoner, the reason for the execution and who ordered it.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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With using only 80 words, you were able to give the reader a full story of the prisoner, the reason for the execution and who ordered it.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from BethShelby
Interesting flash, I assume this prosecutor was more interesting in justice than he was doing his job. Sometime justice isn't always decided tin court. I wonder if prosecutors ever take the drastic step of hiring and assassin.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Interesting flash, I assume this prosecutor was more interesting in justice than he was doing his job. Sometime justice isn't always decided tin court. I wonder if prosecutors ever take the drastic step of hiring and assassin.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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In the world of fiction, it certainly seems possible. Thanks for reading.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Now I could go with that! There are many crooks out there that a shot in the head could change many other people's lives for the better, and at the same time save the tax payer a mound of money. This is a good flash fiction contest entry. Good luck! :)) Sandra
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Now I could go with that! There are many crooks out there that a shot in the head could change many other people's lives for the better, and at the same time save the tax payer a mound of money. This is a good flash fiction contest entry. Good luck! :)) Sandra
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from jenintorre
Wow. I love this. You have written a complete novel in just 80 words. I didn't see it coming but I love a happy ending. This should win the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Wow. I love this. You have written a complete novel in just 80 words. I didn't see it coming but I love a happy ending. This should win the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your support.
Comment from Earl Corp
I think you could expand on this into a book. There could be some good back stories and character development. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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I think you could expand on this into a book. There could be some good back stories and character development. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you. Yes, you never know what could happen. I once expanded an old drabble of mine and it was recently published. We'll see what happens to Graham.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a complete story is so many words. I agree that trials don't always go as planned. But this crime can be solved and both the prosecutor and the sniper will end up in jail for life instead of the drug dealer.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
dragonpoet
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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This is a complete story is so many words. I agree that trials don't always go as planned. But this crime can be solved and both the prosecutor and the sniper will end up in jail for life instead of the drug dealer.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
dragonpoet
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reviewing. We'll save the consequences for the potential sequel. ;)
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No problem. Good plan.
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