Chip's Poetry
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Comment from flylikeaneagle
Chip: great awarenss of jumping from the famous bridge. We need to reach out and help others with love. You have a winner!!! Stay well.
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Chip: great awarenss of jumping from the famous bridge. We need to reach out and help others with love. You have a winner!!! Stay well.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the generous rating and kind review!
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a pretty good poem. Not much with only six words to use but your picture enhances your poem deeply. One could just sit down and write an entire story from your poem and picture. Great job!
Patty
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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This is a pretty good poem. Not much with only six words to use but your picture enhances your poem deeply. One could just sit down and write an entire story from your poem and picture. Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Patty.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from QC Poet
I guess that's why gravity keeps us grounded. Remember going across the SF bridge on the way back from Santa Rosa,California it's an odd feeling crossing at night. Thanks for Sharing this poem offering.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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I guess that's why gravity keeps us grounded. Remember going across the SF bridge on the way back from Santa Rosa,California it's an odd feeling crossing at night. Thanks for Sharing this poem offering.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Four Seconds
by Chip Kuzborski
Hello, Chip,
A great entry for the 6 Word Poetry contest. You say a lot with just six words. Gravity is not a good friend as we get older... everything goes down. LoL I love the presentation. The bridge made me think of the people that commit suicide on a bridge.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Four Seconds
by Chip Kuzborski
Hello, Chip,
A great entry for the 6 Word Poetry contest. You say a lot with just six words. Gravity is not a good friend as we get older... everything goes down. LoL I love the presentation. The bridge made me think of the people that commit suicide on a bridge.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Very true...thanks, Gypsy!
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I found your photo to be very interesting , it captured my attention from the first word to the last
it is such a beautiful bridge yet so many people take their life from it, why?
thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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I found your photo to be very interesting , it captured my attention from the first word to the last
it is such a beautiful bridge yet so many people take their life from it, why?
thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Cookie.
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i have not answered sooner due to illness
have a blessed day
your very welcome ,sorry
Have a blessed day
Comment from Neonewman
Oh,Lord! Isn't this the truth lol. This is an awesome addition to this particular little six word writing prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
God bless
Steve
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Oh,Lord! Isn't this the truth lol. This is an awesome addition to this particular little six word writing prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Thanks, Steve.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is a great entry in the six word contest. You packed volumes in these lines and thank you for your author note. I didn't realize it only takes 4 seconds for a person jumping of the Golden Gate Bridge to reach the water. Unfathomable! I wonder if any human can survive that jump.
Beautiful presentation and artwork. I wish you luck in that contest, this should do very well.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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This is a great entry in the six word contest. You packed volumes in these lines and thank you for your author note. I didn't realize it only takes 4 seconds for a person jumping of the Golden Gate Bridge to reach the water. Unfathomable! I wonder if any human can survive that jump.
Beautiful presentation and artwork. I wish you luck in that contest, this should do very well.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Muse.
Comment from closetpoetjester
Wow, this packed a punch Chip! Four seconds is certainly not long for your life to flash before your eyes. I think you've shared something that leaves the reader pondering long after the words are read. Thoughtful, minimal but created a vivid picture that impacted the reader. Well done.
Cheers P
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Wow, this packed a punch Chip! Four seconds is certainly not long for your life to flash before your eyes. I think you've shared something that leaves the reader pondering long after the words are read. Thoughtful, minimal but created a vivid picture that impacted the reader. Well done.
Cheers P
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Many thanks, P!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Chip, this is an excellent one line poem. These short forms are not easy but you have done a good job here. Great, appropriate picture. Well done and good luck - warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Hello Chip, this is an excellent one line poem. These short forms are not easy but you have done a good job here. Great, appropriate picture. Well done and good luck - warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Dorothy!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like it is a long way down and I doubt anyone survives such a jump and your words are indeed filled with horror here. Six words of terror Chip, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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It sounds like it is a long way down and I doubt anyone survives such a jump and your words are indeed filled with horror here. Six words of terror Chip, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Many thanks, Dolly! (sorry for the late response, I haven't been around here often as of late)