Reverie of the Poet's Pen
Without the letter 'A'...27 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Nice entry for the Life Without The Letter A writing prompt contest. It must be hard to write without the letter A but you did well.
The poem is about the contest rules of this odd contest.
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Hello anonymous
Nice entry for the Life Without The Letter A writing prompt contest. It must be hard to write without the letter A but you did well.
The poem is about the contest rules of this odd contest.
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review - so glad you enjoyed this one (twas a bit of a challenge)!! Have a wonderful week!
Comment from roof35
This is an excellent entry for the No "A Contest." It flows beautifully. The illustration pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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This is an excellent entry for the No "A Contest." It flows beautifully. The illustration pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your encouraging review - so glad you enjoyed this one (twas a bit of a challenge)!! Have a wonderful week!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, a very well written poem with no sign on an A. So, clever, not just well written but you have displayed good abab rhyme throughout and the rhythm is very good. Well done. Good Luck in the contest with such a splendid contender. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Hello anon, a very well written poem with no sign on an A. So, clever, not just well written but you have displayed good abab rhyme throughout and the rhythm is very good. Well done. Good Luck in the contest with such a splendid contender. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review - so glad you enjoyed this one (twas a bit of a challenge). Have a wonderful week!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem without the letter A, Reverie of the Poet's Pen, finds the poet musing towards the light and weightless butterfly, whiling dodging As along the way.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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This poem without the letter A, Reverie of the Poet's Pen, finds the poet musing towards the light and weightless butterfly, whiling dodging As along the way.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review - so glad you enjoyed this one (twas a bit of a challenge)!! Have a wonderful week!
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
ha ha! This was a great entry! I like the way you broke the "fourth wall" and brought the rules of the contest and the reader into your poem! It allowed you to make this a more humorous poem than it might otherwise have been.
Your rhyming seems natural and unforced. All in all, excellent job! Who needs the letter A? You've proven that it's superfluous!
Susan
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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ha ha! This was a great entry! I like the way you broke the "fourth wall" and brought the rules of the contest and the reader into your poem! It allowed you to make this a more humorous poem than it might otherwise have been.
Your rhyming seems natural and unforced. All in all, excellent job! Who needs the letter A? You've proven that it's superfluous!
Susan
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review - so glad you enjoyed this one (twas a bit of a challenge)!! Have a wonderful week!
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I Love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match. You captured my attention from the start.
To read a poem like this must have took some time
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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I Love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match. You captured my attention from the start.
To read a poem like this must have took some time
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much for your review and those bright, shiny stars, Miss Cookie - so glad you enjoyed this one (twas more than a bit of a challenge)!! Have a wonderful week!
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It was my pleasure Have a blessed week
Cookie
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
It is not easy to write without using the letter "A" much less write a story. You did it though! I enjoyed this writing. I hope all goes well in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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It is not easy to write without using the letter "A" much less write a story. You did it though! I enjoyed this writing. I hope all goes well in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review - so glad you enjoyed this one (twas a bit of a challenge)!! Have a wonderful week!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem without using the letter 'a'. It seems to be quite a task to find the right words to make the theme sensible without using 'a' not even once.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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A very well-written poem without using the letter 'a'. It seems to be quite a task to find the right words to make the theme sensible without using 'a' not even once.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Sandra, for such an awesomely encouraging review - I have to admit it really was a fun challenge. Please be sure to enjoy your Sunday!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Beautiful writing and you clearly was able to write it without using the letter a. Amazing work here. I love butterflies so many beautiful things to be said about butterflies. We'll focus first on butterflies humming around the midnight sun. Colourful wings seek to enrich repose your mind once sought.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Beautiful writing and you clearly was able to write it without using the letter a. Amazing work here. I love butterflies so many beautiful things to be said about butterflies. We'll focus first on butterflies humming around the midnight sun. Colourful wings seek to enrich repose your mind once sought.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Joanne, for such an awesomely encouraging review - I have to admit it really was a fun challenge. Please be sure to enjoy your Sunday!
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from Mimi Linny
Super job in composing this B-Z poetry piece! With super rhyme and rhythm, you've chosen words to perfection, not using "something" we know is one key element in effective writing... quite difficult to do! Well done! Cheers to you!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Super job in composing this B-Z poetry piece! With super rhyme and rhythm, you've chosen words to perfection, not using "something" we know is one key element in effective writing... quite difficult to do! Well done! Cheers to you!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Oh my goodness, Mimi - what a lovely review! Thank you for such encouragement framed in those wonderful stars! You know, I have to admit it really was a fun challenge. Please be sure to enjoy your Sunday!
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You're very welcome!
