Unseen Hands
An driving incident with no explanation17 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Of course, God was there. I have no doubt, Mystery Writer. Your story is well-written. It was filled with vivid imagery and great details. I was engaged from start to finish. I like the use of bold font and the breaks between paragraphs.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Of course, God was there. I have no doubt, Mystery Writer. Your story is well-written. It was filled with vivid imagery and great details. I was engaged from start to finish. I like the use of bold font and the breaks between paragraphs.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Jan. I really appreciate the review and nice comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. :-)
Comment from damommy
I believe it. I've had things like that happen to me where there was no explanation. It could only have God sending my guardian angel to watch over me, just as He did you.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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I believe it. I've had things like that happen to me where there was no explanation. It could only have God sending my guardian angel to watch over me, just as He did you.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the grear review and comments. I'm glad you have these kind of experiences too. There are unseen forces at work protecting us.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a winner! That was an amazing show of unseen hands protecting both you and your daughter. You work on earth was not yet done.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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This is a winner! That was an amazing show of unseen hands protecting both you and your daughter. You work on earth was not yet done.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the review and nice comments. There is no way to explain this without God's interventions.
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That is exactly what I thought!
Comment from equestrik
I think you have written a good story about your experience. I have heard of other similar stories and they always make me wonder-a lot. Good story and safe driving to you and your daughter.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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I think you have written a good story about your experience. I have heard of other similar stories and they always make me wonder-a lot. Good story and safe driving to you and your daughter.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and excellent comments.
::-)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Chills! I'd have thought I was coming down with Corona had I not read this--a double miracle--swerving per se, then into yard without hitting a tree or leaving tracks! This may be a winner. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Chills! I'd have thought I was coming down with Corona had I not read this--a double miracle--swerving per se, then into yard without hitting a tree or leaving tracks! This may be a winner. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you for a great review and comments.
:-)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow this is quite amazing sometimes things are happening with a reason and in this story is to show we do have a guardian angel. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Wow this is quite amazing sometimes things are happening with a reason and in this story is to show we do have a guardian angel. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much, Iza. I really appreciate the review and comments.
Comment from LisaMay
I sure do think you were saved from injury by a guardian angel! You've told this story well - the reader is drawn into the drama of your daughter's anxiety, the mis-step, and the mad surge through the yard with no damage to anything. Yes, an inexplicable miracle.
I hope it didn't put your daughter off getting her full license - it should have reassured her that the Lord is on watch.
A correction in this line:
I thought your(remove the 'r', should be 'you') were doing it. I just let go."
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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I sure do think you were saved from injury by a guardian angel! You've told this story well - the reader is drawn into the drama of your daughter's anxiety, the mis-step, and the mad surge through the yard with no damage to anything. Yes, an inexplicable miracle.
I hope it didn't put your daughter off getting her full license - it should have reassured her that the Lord is on watch.
A correction in this line:
I thought your(remove the 'r', should be 'you') were doing it. I just let go."
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and great comments. Thank also for seeing my typo. I've fixed it. My daughter did get her license the following week.