Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 71 "The lion..."Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Ben Colder
I was thinking about a song we sang at church. "Send Judah First." The scriptures are a live and you share them with blessings . That is a good thing.
Blessing Bro.
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I was thinking about a song we sang at church. "Send Judah First." The scriptures are a live and you share them with blessings . That is a good thing.
Blessing Bro.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
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Judah meaning praise of course. Thanks for the beautiful review, blessings Roy
Comment from Gert sherwood
Roy
your renga you wrote and posted into a chapter in the book Renga Multi-Author Book titled The lion...
reminds me "The lamb with the lion" - often a paraphrase from Isaiah, and more closely quoted as "the lion and lamb", "a child will lead them", and the like - are an artistic and symbolic device, most generally related to peace.
Gert
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Roy
your renga you wrote and posted into a chapter in the book Renga Multi-Author Book titled The lion...
reminds me "The lamb with the lion" - often a paraphrase from Isaiah, and more closely quoted as "the lion and lamb", "a child will lead them", and the like - are an artistic and symbolic device, most generally related to peace.
Gert
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
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Thanks Gert, for your excellent comments and wonderful review, blessings Roy,
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is well-said, an attractive poem taking its inspiration from the bible. It is an interesting entry to be part of the multi-author book.
I especially liked the imagery of
Erase jester's pawn.
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This is well-said, an attractive poem taking its inspiration from the bible. It is an interesting entry to be part of the multi-author book.
I especially liked the imagery of
Erase jester's pawn.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thanks Katherine, for your terrific comments and beautiful review, blessings Roy,
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I like this 5 - 7 - 5 with the striking art choice with the theme of the Second Coming or Millennium. Plus I caught "n" consonance with end words morn and pawn.
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I like this 5 - 7 - 5 with the striking art choice with the theme of the Second Coming or Millennium. Plus I caught "n" consonance with end words morn and pawn.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thanks Crystie, for your superb comments and lovely review, blessings Roy,
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, Roy, I don't read a whole lot of poetry, but whenever I have a few extra minutes and need a little uplifting spirit during the deep-thought days (anniversary of 9-11), I can always count on you. Thanks for sharing.
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Well, Roy, I don't read a whole lot of poetry, but whenever I have a few extra minutes and need a little uplifting spirit during the deep-thought days (anniversary of 9-11), I can always count on you. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
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Thanks Ric, for your terrific comments and beautiful review, blessings Roy,
Comment from mermaids
I like the image of the lion and the lamb rising up together. This is an excellent little faith based poem showing God's power over adversity. Excellent use of words.
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I like the image of the lion and the lamb rising up together. This is an excellent little faith based poem showing God's power over adversity. Excellent use of words.
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much, for your terrific comments and beautiful review, blessings Roy,