Evening
And all that it encompasses...29 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely presentation with contrasting colors of the blue background and bold orange font! And I like how you rhymed this very brief lanturne form (calls, falls) and your use of personification. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Lovely presentation with contrasting colors of the blue background and bold orange font! And I like how you rhymed this very brief lanturne form (calls, falls) and your use of personification. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Lantern Poetry writing prompt.
This colorful, short piece describes night fall perfectly.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Lantern Poetry writing prompt.
This colorful, short piece describes night fall perfectly.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements of the contest. It has a good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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This poem meets the requirements of the contest. It has a good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Lantern poetry writing prompt. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Lantern poetry writing prompt. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Bill Schott
This lantern poem, Evening, has the proper formatting and waits patiently through these nine syllables for night time to arrive.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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This lantern poem, Evening, has the proper formatting and waits patiently through these nine syllables for night time to arrive.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much, Bill, and have a great evening!
Comment from Manh C Dang
Beautiful! This poem definitely captures the evening mood (cool night and warm twiIight.) I gave it the 7th vote. Good job, mystery poet! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Beautiful! This poem definitely captures the evening mood (cool night and warm twiIight.) I gave it the 7th vote. Good job, mystery poet! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Wow, Manh, thank you so much for those shining stars but more than that for your wonderful comments! May you have a great evening! 8-)
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like the way the words roll off the tongue. It leads me through the changes as they are happening. Gives my mind a masterpiece to watch while bringing me to the time I like the best night.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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I like the way the words roll off the tongue. It leads me through the changes as they are happening. Gives my mind a masterpiece to watch while bringing me to the time I like the best night.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Wow, Mia, thank you so much for those shining stars but more than that for your wonderful comments! You be sure to have a great evening! 8-)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Nice entry for the Lantern poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. It flows well. I like the presentation. I like the twilight topic. Good luck in the contest. You got my vote.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Hello anonymous
Nice entry for the Lantern poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. It flows well. I like the presentation. I like the twilight topic. Good luck in the contest. You got my vote.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much!!
Comment from LisaMay
Hooray! At last a poem that does look like the lantern it's supposed to... and so beautifully presented. Terrific choice of illustration to fit the theme, and a rhyme to polish it. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Hooray! At last a poem that does look like the lantern it's supposed to... and so beautifully presented. Terrific choice of illustration to fit the theme, and a rhyme to polish it. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much!!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Another beautifully written poem. I love how the poem flows so naturally. How they are connected. It is like a close-knit poem family.
An excellent poem.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Another beautifully written poem. I love how the poem flows so naturally. How they are connected. It is like a close-knit poem family.
An excellent poem.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much!!