Leaves Curling
An equinox spins Fall closer more.41 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
I really like your phrasing with leaves curling and drawing closed as the season enters its final passage.
This is a beautiful snapshot of autumn and a fine Lantern poem.
Wishing you much luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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I really like your phrasing with leaves curling and drawing closed as the season enters its final passage.
This is a beautiful snapshot of autumn and a fine Lantern poem.
Wishing you much luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank Gloria, thank you.thank you Jen
Comment from jenintorre
You tell a really good story in this lantern poem. Such a good description of Autumn in so few words. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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You tell a really good story in this lantern poem. Such a good description of Autumn in so few words. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Smiling back, thank you!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Lantern Poetry writing prompt.
This colorful, short piece describes the end of summer very nicely.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Lantern Poetry writing prompt.
This colorful, short piece describes the end of summer very nicely.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Sharon, thank you.
Comment from mermaids
Your use of words creates a vivid picture of nature. The image of leaves curling does signal the end of summer. I like this poetic form and the shape of the poem, it reminds me of Fall.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Your use of words creates a vivid picture of nature. The image of leaves curling does signal the end of summer. I like this poetic form and the shape of the poem, it reminds me of Fall.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you! Smiling back..
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Lantern poetry writing prompt. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Lantern poetry writing prompt. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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You are the best!
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent picture to compliment you lovely lantern poem. I've never tried to write a lantern poem. It looks like a challenge that you have accomplished beautifully.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Excellent picture to compliment you lovely lantern poem. I've never tried to write a lantern poem. It looks like a challenge that you have accomplished beautifully.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Janet, I always value your reviews and comments, thank you.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like the way you use nature to show how the season is changing. The picture goes very well with the piece. I helps create the image in my mind of a full grown tree that is going from green to go to brown to empty.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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I like the way you use nature to show how the season is changing. The picture goes very well with the piece. I helps create the image in my mind of a full grown tree that is going from green to go to brown to empty.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from RShipp
So many variations of poem types on this site. I enjoy learning the new ones!
What a perfect picture to show your theme of the 'drawing to the close' of Fall.
Well done.
Best of luck in the Lantern poetry writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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So many variations of poem types on this site. I enjoy learning the new ones!
What a perfect picture to show your theme of the 'drawing to the close' of Fall.
Well done.
Best of luck in the Lantern poetry writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Robert, thank you.
Comment from Raul1
I think that this poem is the very essence of poetry. I feel like it easy to read. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Good luck on the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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I think that this poem is the very essence of poetry. I feel like it easy to read. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Good luck on the contest!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thanks
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
lovely five line verse about the end of summer. I liked the description "leaves curling." It really set the stage for the rest of the poem.
Well done!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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lovely five line verse about the end of summer. I liked the description "leaves curling." It really set the stage for the rest of the poem.
Well done!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Susan, thanks