The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "Weight me down"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
17 total reviews
Comment from Veenbee
Very cute story. Hey I can relate. My problem was that I exercised soo much I gained more weight in muscles and the fat never left. Now I look like a fat she hulk. I too came to the conclusion, you just have to accept things and be happy.
Correction-'Yeah, the old bastard weights or should I say scales himself'-weighs
Veenbee
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Very cute story. Hey I can relate. My problem was that I exercised soo much I gained more weight in muscles and the fat never left. Now I look like a fat she hulk. I too came to the conclusion, you just have to accept things and be happy.
Correction-'Yeah, the old bastard weights or should I say scales himself'-weighs
Veenbee
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
Comment from equestrik
This is a cleverly written story and for sure speaks of what is going on with an everyday person living in a covid world. I love the sense of humor you laced it with.There are a few misspells and grammar issues but, nice job.
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This is a cleverly written story and for sure speaks of what is going on with an everyday person living in a covid world. I love the sense of humor you laced it with.There are a few misspells and grammar issues but, nice job.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
Comment from Jg
Lovely . I love the idea behind the story . And I find the last line very impressive and humorous as it speaks of ' coronella having the couple round together '. Despite challenges we can look for the best in situations too , another lesson I was reminded of in those same lines too . Excellent writing.
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Lovely . I love the idea behind the story . And I find the last line very impressive and humorous as it speaks of ' coronella having the couple round together '. Despite challenges we can look for the best in situations too , another lesson I was reminded of in those same lines too . Excellent writing.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
Comment from royowen
I understand about the fatter and fatter, yes, it's quite hard to keep one's weight, the good thing is our state has had very few new cases of the virus, in fact only one state does it have critical levels of outbreak. Out ot seven states. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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I understand about the fatter and fatter, yes, it's quite hard to keep one's weight, the good thing is our state has had very few new cases of the virus, in fact only one state does it have critical levels of outbreak. Out ot seven states. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, Weight me Down, is hilarious as you handle the dilemma of constricted movements and boredom eating to equal the Corona Calorie Challenge.
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This story, Weight me Down, is hilarious as you handle the dilemma of constricted movements and boredom eating to equal the Corona Calorie Challenge.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This short story has a sound characterization and nice taletelling about weight, scale and score; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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This short story has a sound characterization and nice taletelling about weight, scale and score; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
(weight me down s/b weigh; husband bathroom s/b husband's; old bastard weights himself s/b weighs; everybody dance s/b dances)
This is a satirical tour de force--hilarious! Well done--good luck! Cheers. LIZ
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(weight me down s/b weigh; husband bathroom s/b husband's; old bastard weights himself s/b weighs; everybody dance s/b dances)
This is a satirical tour de force--hilarious! Well done--good luck! Cheers. LIZ
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020