seagrass plenitude (haiku)
The trail to my beach is bordered by seagrass...38 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker
You pastel photo lends a dreamy, fantasy--like ambience to your poe. I really like your Haiku poem; the last line is a surprise, as a good Haiku should have, and it's striking. Excellent work.
Best wishes.
Cindy
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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You pastel photo lends a dreamy, fantasy--like ambience to your poe. I really like your Haiku poem; the last line is a surprise, as a good Haiku should have, and it's striking. Excellent work.
Best wishes.
Cindy
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Cindy, your comments. It means so much to me to have such a a truthful understanding of my lines.
Comment from Mastery
Hello Amada. Good to see you posting more often. I remember when I first joined back in 2004, you posted almost everyday it seemed. anyway, this is some more of your talent on display and thank you:
"as its blades stand in splendor--" (Good image)
Bless you. : ) Bob
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Hello Amada. Good to see you posting more often. I remember when I first joined back in 2004, you posted almost everyday it seemed. anyway, this is some more of your talent on display and thank you:
"as its blades stand in splendor--" (Good image)
Bless you. : ) Bob
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you Bob for remembering from those old time.s Life stroke my wings for a while, but I am trying to fly again even with wounded wings. Thank you for your support thru the time. Blessings back to you.
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:) Bob
Comment from ameen786
The beauty of poetry is to take the readers with your imagination and you created that vivid imagery in this lively haiku; nice alliteration; thank you for sharing and good luck!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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The beauty of poetry is to take the readers with your imagination and you created that vivid imagery in this lively haiku; nice alliteration; thank you for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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It means much to me, your review is graceful. Thank you.
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
Vivid imagery, your poem lights my imagination as I'm walking with you next to the tall grasses whisper in the breeze. Beautiful Haiku poem.
Well done
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Vivid imagery, your poem lights my imagination as I'm walking with you next to the tall grasses whisper in the breeze. Beautiful Haiku poem.
Well done
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I am honored that you though of this haiku while walking...God bless.
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I loved the imagery in this piece of the grass standing tall in the sunshine. It made it feel very warm and comforting as I was reading it. A really well written piece writing. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I loved the imagery in this piece of the grass standing tall in the sunshine. It made it feel very warm and comforting as I was reading it. A really well written piece writing. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading and commenting in my haiku about seagrass..
Comment from Patty Palmer
A very nice poem! From your words and the beautiful picture gave me really a peaceful feeling! Is that the grass growing that I hear? LOL A peaceful place where the tall grass grow in splendor and the wind hushes its wings, I should think we should be able to hear the grass growing! Great job!
Patty
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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A very nice poem! From your words and the beautiful picture gave me really a peaceful feeling! Is that the grass growing that I hear? LOL A peaceful place where the tall grass grow in splendor and the wind hushes its wings, I should think we should be able to hear the grass growing! Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Hi Patty, thank you for a very insightful review. Blessings when we hear nature speak to us...
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from Irish Rain
Oh, just so pretty!!
I love the picture too!
Just perfect.
This is a wonderful entry to
the haiku contest, I wish you the
very best!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Oh, just so pretty!!
I love the picture too!
Just perfect.
This is a wonderful entry to
the haiku contest, I wish you the
very best!
Blessings...
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you Irish Rain!
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Have a great weekend!!
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent Haiku, and a very worthy. Entry in this haiku poetry contest, you've certainly written a marvellous satori line to back up the two lined narrative, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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This is an excellent Haiku, and a very worthy. Entry in this haiku poetry contest, you've certainly written a marvellous satori line to back up the two lined narrative, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you Roy for all the great things you write about my haiku. Blessings to you as well.
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My pleasure
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and
presentation, Amada.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-That is a great way to
write a haiku, based on
observations.
-You have written a good one
that meets all of the requirements.
-I like the image in line two,
and the satori line is very good, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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-Very nice artwork and
presentation, Amada.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-That is a great way to
write a haiku, based on
observations.
-You have written a good one
that meets all of the requirements.
-I like the image in line two,
and the satori line is very good, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you Pam for reading my haiku and your encouraging review.
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You are very welcome, amada.
Comment from crzypnter
I really enjoyed your haiku, sometimes the best poetry comes from the simple things we do and when we least expect it. Your picture is spot on. Thanks for sharing. Great job God bless
August
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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I really enjoyed your haiku, sometimes the best poetry comes from the simple things we do and when we least expect it. Your picture is spot on. Thanks for sharing. Great job God bless
August
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading my haiku, and for your bless.