The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 61 "Dinu and Leo"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
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Comment from Veenbee
This is a cute story, I wish it was longer but realize that it's a 200 word limit. You started out with 'My Pisa' but it was never made clear to me who that was. Then you went to the dialogue of Leo and Dinu. I had to read it several times but I get t now. I say go on the trip. LOL Veenbee
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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This is a cute story, I wish it was longer but realize that it's a 200 word limit. You started out with 'My Pisa' but it was never made clear to me who that was. Then you went to the dialogue of Leo and Dinu. I had to read it several times but I get t now. I say go on the trip. LOL Veenbee
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from papa55mike
Is the freedom really worth it when you can stay home and cuddle with a kitty? Don't know. What a wonderfully written story.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Is the freedom really worth it when you can stay home and cuddle with a kitty? Don't know. What a wonderfully written story.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written two hundred word story about the cat who likes to ride in a car while the other doesn't. Someone should stay behind to look after the cat while the others travel by car.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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A very well-written two hundred word story about the cat who likes to ride in a car while the other doesn't. Someone should stay behind to look after the cat while the others travel by car.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from LisaMay
I love this fun story that gives us an insight to your kitties personalities and also your living arrangements with them. It's a charming story with fun dialogue.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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I love this fun story that gives us an insight to your kitties personalities and also your living arrangements with them. It's a charming story with fun dialogue.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review 😊
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, I think this little tale will a lot of fans with the cat loving people or the general pet people who can relate to going on a vacation and agonizing over what to do with their pets. I bet they imagine the animals speaking to each other too.
Interesting entry.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Hmm, I think this little tale will a lot of fans with the cat loving people or the general pet people who can relate to going on a vacation and agonizing over what to do with their pets. I bet they imagine the animals speaking to each other too.
Interesting entry.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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yes you are right. Thank you for stopping by
Comment from Tina Crute
What a cute story! I enjoy stories in which we get to hear the animals' thoughts. I love the 'kitty power' idea too.
Good job, and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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What a cute story! I enjoy stories in which we get to hear the animals' thoughts. I love the 'kitty power' idea too.
Good job, and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the encouraging review and the good luck wishes.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a fun contest entry, Mystery Writer. I love the picture. Those 2 kitties are saying 'hurry up, let's get this show on the road!' You told your story well. There is great imagery--I could see and hear this as I read it.
May I suggest:
in (on) my crazy trips
We are bro (bros) forever . . .
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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What a fun contest entry, Mystery Writer. I love the picture. Those 2 kitties are saying 'hurry up, let's get this show on the road!' You told your story well. There is great imagery--I could see and hear this as I read it.
May I suggest:
in (on) my crazy trips
We are bro (bros) forever . . .
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2020