Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

This is a cute story with an unusual ending twist. It should do well as an entry in the 200 Word Story contest. Best of luck!

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 26-Aug-2020

You're welcome.

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello :)
This is really well written and I enjoyed the read.
It is refreshing, clever and you had me fooled! Love the twist at the end.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.