Winds of Change
A Minute poem for the contest71 total reviews
Comment from Minglement
I love this lyrical write, so whimsically describing the change of seasons. The title is perfectly fitting and your presentation artwork, perfect. Well done. Good luck in the contest with this winner :)
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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I love this lyrical write, so whimsically describing the change of seasons. The title is perfectly fitting and your presentation artwork, perfect. Well done. Good luck in the contest with this winner :)
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Many thanks for your review and observations, Minglemint. I appreciate the sixth star. Most generous. Best wishes, Tony
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Well deserved. You know I enjoy your work and your perspectives ;) Take care, Marcia
Comment from roof35
This is a lovely entry for the minute contest. Your illustration of the wind vane sets the mood for your words. I really like your opening line, I hear the wind, its cleansing breath."
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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This is a lovely entry for the minute contest. Your illustration of the wind vane sets the mood for your words. I really like your opening line, I hear the wind, its cleansing breath."
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Many thanks for your review and observations, Roof. Appreciated. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Bill Pinder
I enjoyed this poem about the winds of change that blow in the transition from one season to another. Thanks for sharing your creativity and good luck in the contest. Bill
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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I enjoyed this poem about the winds of change that blow in the transition from one season to another. Thanks for sharing your creativity and good luck in the contest. Bill
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Many thanks for your review and observations, Bill. I appreciate the sixth star. Most generous. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
Well there we go again, another type of poetry. I am getting dizzy with all the different forms. Okay back to your poem. I enjoyed it very much and right away I found you cadence. Good luck and I want yo to know I am trying very hard to not be confused.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Well there we go again, another type of poetry. I am getting dizzy with all the different forms. Okay back to your poem. I enjoyed it very much and right away I found you cadence. Good luck and I want yo to know I am trying very hard to not be confused.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Many thanks for your review and observations, Becky. The wide variety of poetic forms can be a bit overwhelming, can't it? Best just to concentrate on the rhythms of your own heart. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from Susan X Smith
The rhythm of this poem is not the typical kind. I liked the way the rhymes worked with the unusual rhythm. The poem has a light and breezy feel to it. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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The rhythm of this poem is not the typical kind. I liked the way the rhymes worked with the unusual rhythm. The poem has a light and breezy feel to it. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thanks very much for your review and comments, Susan. Much appreciated. Tony
Comment from estory
A really great lyrical poem in the romantic style, with this wonderful image of Persephone bringing spring back to the winter landscape. Winter's tree, that's a great, original image. It really conjures that memory of the tree without its leaves, covered in snow, sleeping through the dark time of the year, waiting to come back to life. estory
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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A really great lyrical poem in the romantic style, with this wonderful image of Persephone bringing spring back to the winter landscape. Winter's tree, that's a great, original image. It really conjures that memory of the tree without its leaves, covered in snow, sleeping through the dark time of the year, waiting to come back to life. estory
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thanks very much for your review and comments, estory. Much appreciated. Tony
Comment from Aussie
Ah, the winter winds wane and give life to the warmth and new birth of spring. Winter is a depressing time, especially during the virus. Spring gives us hope of a new cycle of life in every way. We should be thankful. Well done my friend K xx
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Ah, the winter winds wane and give life to the warmth and new birth of spring. Winter is a depressing time, especially during the virus. Spring gives us hope of a new cycle of life in every way. We should be thankful. Well done my friend K xx
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thanks very much for your review and comments, Kay. Much appreciated. Tony
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Winds of Change", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill, this talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I wish you all the best in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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"Winds of Change", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill, this talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I wish you all the best in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thanks, Duchess. I appreciate your review. Best wishes, Tony.
Comment from Ben B.
This is a very powerful spiritual poem you wrote here. Using the wind as an analogy that applies to us all. Persephone is the Greek goddess right? I actually forgot about her
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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This is a very powerful spiritual poem you wrote here. Using the wind as an analogy that applies to us all. Persephone is the Greek goddess right? I actually forgot about her
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thanks, Ben. I appreciate your review. Yes, she was the Goddess of Spring. Best wishes, Tony.
Comment from catch22
Hi Tony, you've penned a good minute poem that tells the tale of the changing seasons well. Excellent smooth meter and good end rhymes as well. I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Hi Tony, you've penned a good minute poem that tells the tale of the changing seasons well. Excellent smooth meter and good end rhymes as well. I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thanks, Pam. I appreciate your review and encouragement. Best wishes, Tony.