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Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful offering for the contest here.... yes, I believe the 'Alas!' is certainly warranted.... sigh. Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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A wonderful offering for the contest here.... yes, I believe the 'Alas!' is certainly warranted.... sigh. Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Hello Yvette and thank you very much for stopping by; appreciate your time and the kind review; please take care my friend.
Comment from RodG
The Family of Man--aka mankind--is a good topic for this contest entry. The Old Testament alludes to the "tribes" of man. I think "race" or "racial" is a totally different issue.
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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The Family of Man--aka mankind--is a good topic for this contest entry. The Old Testament alludes to the "tribes" of man. I think "race" or "racial" is a totally different issue.
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Hello RodG and thank you very much for your time and the biblical insights.
Comment from equestrik
Yes! I love this and couldn't agree more. This is a great poem for the writing prompt, 'family' . The picture also goes perfectly with the words and sentiment of your poem.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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Yes! I love this and couldn't agree more. This is a great poem for the writing prompt, 'family' . The picture also goes perfectly with the words and sentiment of your poem.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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My friend, I appreciate your time and thank you for the encouraging comments.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Adam, the first man created, and we all are just all members of the same family, same race, same identity; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Adam, the first man created, and we all are just all members of the same family, same race, same identity; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
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My friend, I thank you for your time and thoughtful review.