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Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Water"With their call stalled, Liz & Linda begin walking
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Comment from Mistydawn
I hope they're able to find the missing girls and that they are able to make it through the waterfall alright. I'm so glad they were able to get dragonfly through the tunnel. Your chapter is very well-written interesting, star to finish. Your characters, thoughts, and dialogue seem realistic. I look forward to reading more.
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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I hope they're able to find the missing girls and that they are able to make it through the waterfall alright. I'm so glad they were able to get dragonfly through the tunnel. Your chapter is very well-written interesting, star to finish. Your characters, thoughts, and dialogue seem realistic. I look forward to reading more.
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your very supportive involv4 review. I'm glad you are appreciating it.