Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 63 "World Revolves 'Round Him"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
18 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, he's adorable! No wonder your world revolves around him. And that's the way it should be for our relationship with our grandchildren. We are finally able to love without the responsibilities of being parents.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Oh, he's adorable! No wonder your world revolves around him. And that's the way it should be for our relationship with our grandchildren. We are finally able to love without the responsibilities of being parents.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much, Helen, for your valuable time and review. He is the cutest. This morning he kept calling me from downstairs, to come down and when I did he gave me a big hug and told me he loves me...he melted my heart.
Gypsy
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Awww! That is just the best feeling!! 💖💖
Comment from kahpot
A very honest 5-7-5 poem, yes little ones do think it is all about them and at that age it should be, gorgeous photo and excellent follow on of tempeste poem****kahpot
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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A very honest 5-7-5 poem, yes little ones do think it is all about them and at that age it should be, gorgeous photo and excellent follow on of tempeste poem****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much, Kym, for your valuable time and review.
Gypsy
Comment from Ben B.
Cute kid and nice haiku. Personally I wouldn't recommend using a line from such a short poem for the title. That's like watching a movie trailer and then finding out the trailer is half the movie.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Cute kid and nice haiku. Personally I wouldn't recommend using a line from such a short poem for the title. That's like watching a movie trailer and then finding out the trailer is half the movie.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2020
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Haiku don't need titles but fanstory requires it and in this site people usually get the title from the poem. It doesn't matter. Thank you very much for your valuable time and review.
Gypsy
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy aka Nina!
True stories make this renga collaboration very special. Atticus is a lucky grandson to have you around all the time. Enjoy because the time does fly by )in your lives).
Take care of each other (-;
Mark
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Gypsy aka Nina!
True stories make this renga collaboration very special. Atticus is a lucky grandson to have you around all the time. Enjoy because the time does fly by )in your lives).
Take care of each other (-;
Mark
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Mark, I enjoy it and I know time goes by too fast.... Sigh...
Have a wonderful weekend, Mark.
Gypsy
Comment from Gert sherwood
Gypsy Blue your Renga 5/7/5 Stanza (chapter 63)
drew my full attention when I saw the sweet child your Grand
son and I can see and understand why he believes the world
revolves around him.
Thank you Gypsy bringing back beautiful memories of my my grand children, who now are grown with their grown children.
Gert
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Gypsy Blue your Renga 5/7/5 Stanza (chapter 63)
drew my full attention when I saw the sweet child your Grand
son and I can see and understand why he believes the world
revolves around him.
Thank you Gypsy bringing back beautiful memories of my my grand children, who now are grown with their grown children.
Gert
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
You and my wife are both held captive by two very cute little boys, our grandson is likewise very self absorbed, how vulnerable and precious are they? You keep him.shielded, he's got plenty of time, he'll grow up to be complete person then. So thanks for sharing, Great post Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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You and my wife are both held captive by two very cute little boys, our grandson is likewise very self absorbed, how vulnerable and precious are they? You keep him.shielded, he's got plenty of time, he'll grow up to be complete person then. So thanks for sharing, Great post Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
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Most welcome
Comment from June Sargent
A sweet follow up to Tempeste's couplet. Atticus has the cutest little face. My grandsons are teenagers now - but I remember and treasure those toddler years. My world revolves around them now in my golden years.
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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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A sweet follow up to Tempeste's couplet. Atticus has the cutest little face. My grandsons are teenagers now - but I remember and treasure those toddler years. My world revolves around them now in my golden years.
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you, June. He is a handful but so cute :)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
My grandkids are eighteen and thirteen; STILL, my world revolves around them. I have helped raise them full-time while their parents work. So, to an extent, my world also revolves around my daughter and son-in-law.
Well-worded, touching poem!
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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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My grandkids are eighteen and thirteen; STILL, my world revolves around them. I have helped raise them full-time while their parents work. So, to an extent, my world also revolves around my daughter and son-in-law.
Well-worded, touching poem!
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
